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anbu31uchiha chapter 3 . 6/2 Nice story |
ProfesorGoblitz chapter 3 . 1/15 Please do continue, I love this story |
EmperorCeph chapter 3 . 1/2 You gonna continue this soon? Really starting to like it |
Theunfunny9 chapter 3 . 12/17/2019 I'm liking the amount of research you've put into the real world story of Karna. I also enjoy Louise's continuous misunderstandings. |
Xarserum chapter 3 . 12/13/2019 Not only "D" rank even "E" rank is superhuman. "There are five main ranks, E, D, C, B, A, that each have a quantifiable number assigned to it. Considering "one" to be a "normal value", E is equal to "ten" and it increases by ten incrementally until reaching "fifty" at A." |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2019 I NEED MOAR! |
alexis chapter 3 . 11/28/2019 cette histoire un grand potentielle j'espére de voir un prochain chapitre car j'aime beaucoup cette histoire même j ais 3 chapitre en espérant que vous la continuer. |
Okatusareawesome101 chapter 3 . 10/8/2019 This is a really good story dude, I like the way you characterized Karna and I also admire the sheer amount of research youve done to get all of the details right. His interactions with the rest of the cast are enjoyable and it is quite funny to read some of the misunderstandings that arise. |
Shadvos chapter 3 . 9/5/2019 I will admit that I like your idea here, I really do. But I can't help but notice some inconsistencies. My first thought when you said that the True Heroic Spirit Karna was summoned was that this man has no idea of what a true Heroic Spirit really entails. Servants are copies of the true Heroic Spirit, using the 'emanations' from the real deal to create that copy. Since Servants are not the full deal they are weaker than they would be as a Heroic Spirit. So Karna here the one whose Visavi Shakti was pretty much a Nuke? Yeah he was actually underplayed compared to the Heroic Spirit who would be capable of boiling away all 7 oceans in the world at the same time. Speaking of attacks lets talk about the Counter Force and how it works to keep Servant Nonle Phantasm's from permanently altering the World. You see Louise's World is not connected to the same World as the Nasuverses so that means the rules are different. Summoning the True Heroic Spirit Karna is unrealistic whereas a Lancer class Servant Karna would fit your uses just as well and not be so far out of the realm of believability. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2019 The fact that it’s been two years since an update is a great shame, given how great this is. |
MegaElite chapter 3 . 5/24/2019 Wow, dang. Really liked this story. It is a shame that you didn't bother continuing it, but I am grateful that you at least made the idea and got it out there. |
Nikkless chapter 3 . 2/13/2019 Hope you will continue this |
Nikkless chapter 1 . 2/13/2019 Hope there wont be other Nasuverse Heroic Spirits |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 3 . 12/31/2018 - I dearly hope this continues. - These were his Lancer stats. Karna as someone in highest tiers of warriors everywhere, with great feats as charioteer and archer should probably come with more Noble Phantasms and appropriate skills. - In regard to pairings, he can be an excellent Big Brother (in-law) for Luise. - Come to think of it he DID act like Matou Shinji. Alaya seemed awfully familiar but SHinji is just too much of a pest for me to remember. Huh. |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/31/2018 A pity. Despite knowing his fate, Karna was the one Hero I cheered for when reading Mahabharata. To have his legend be forgotten... Also, a full Heroic Spirit of Karna's prestige? I think he is one of the few qualified as Grand for Lancer class. |