Just read through this today and I gotta say I am loving it. Can't wait for more to be added. I like your writing style too. Great job so far.

Huh, very good story. I liked how you added reference to certain aspects from the Zelda games into story, some of which that I was able to caught on. Also, having Ganondorf (aka Ganon) sending both Link and Zelda via magic portal was legit reasoning seeing that he has alot of magic power thanks to his Tri-force of Power. The writing was solid and was well written in detail in some parts, mostly with the action.

The only nitpick that I have with this is how sentences are too mashed together since I had a difficult time trying to know who was talking and what was a new sentence for a character when they talk.

Still, all in all, this was really good and I can not wait to see what would happen in the next chapter. Plus, looking forward to seeing the OC that you plan on introducing.