Reviews for Pokemon ash's journey
Animestar youtube chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
whatever I don't care about what you think Mr guest?
rufus264 chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Nice story
FuryWrites chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
This is the greatest story I've read in my life. After reading this masterpiece, every other story on this site seems irrelevant. Fuck "Pedestal", fuck "The Sun Soul", this story makes those seem like they were written by a two year old. This story is a masterpiece as it is. So please, dont update it anymore, as it would ruin the perfection that it currently is.
Bravo, I repeat, bravo!
-Fury
TehSammichMan chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
I thought it was a simply riveting tale, full of surprising twists and turns I"m sure any reader will find heartbreaking in their own way. This sets the stage to bring about a completely fascinating spin on the Pokemon universe; how will Ash come to learn of such a great tragedy that took his parents from him? What adventures will he have in Unova? The tension is absolutely and positively unbearable. You've created a masterpiece, good sir, and the basic building blocks for the greatest story this site has ever seen.

You've created something beautiful in the darkness that is this cesspool of a website, a diamond in the rough. Please don't disappoint me by uploading any other chapters, as the story is perfect as-is and further chapters will only serve to smear its good name.

I wish you well.
luqie10 chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Psychic attacks don't work on darkrai