Reviews for Our Goal
TheEnigmatic97 chapter 1 . 11/15/2018
I have read this so many times ever since this was uploaded, and I can't believe that I haven't said how beautiful this one is.
catspats31 chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
Despite the wonderful writing quality that this story has in terms of spelling and grammar, you have to keep in mind that there is a reason why this site makes to hard for people to access the link to your Patreon account: It doesn't allow anyone not to use this site for any commercial use, without the prior written authorization of this site.
kcg998 chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
These one shots are perfect!
UltimateCCC chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
What if Ash and Serena met and catch both a Shiny Gallade and a Gardevoir?
Alexandria Prime chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
This was perfect. And trust Ash to be late for the party! Ha ha!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
wow! this is a really great spicy and sweet amourshipping story dude in fact i hope we all get to see serena and ash meet again and get married together as a couple in the future as husband and wife in the pokemon series and beyond. we all will remain amourshippers and we all will continue to support amourshipping for all time. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.
P.s marry christmas dude ;)
ChE clarinetist chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
This was rather different, but it really worked well. More realistic and practical instead of idealized or romanticized. Good interactions of characters and time setting. I'll need to pay attention to know if and when the visual portion comes out to go with this.
Tenzalucard123 chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Its Art!
Rajiv A. Rajaram chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Oh man! What another beautiful one shot! I totally loved the way it was written and everything in it was so mysterious from Ash's side of becoming a Pokémon master. Even diving through Serena's feelings and getting lost in her goal was good. The characters you added here and there made it so much better as well. There isn't much more to say than that tbh. Loved it all.
FantasyLover88 chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
This was beautiful! I honestly don't know what else to say, besides the fact that your profile picture's been in my head the whole time I was reading this oneshot! I can't wait to see part 2 of the prologue and what else you have in store for us! :D
Amourshipper35 chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Very sweet one shot I liked seeing serana and ash rebutited at airport and finally saying I love you