Sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while

DJ and Heather (Who would’ve thought...I LOVE IT)

I love that DJ has plot relevancy and Courtney and Duncan have so much chemistry! I LOVE IT. Seeing Gwen be their secret weapon is interesting and I can’t wait till this is updated

Nice one mate!

Good chapter. You know, for a race of supposedly-emotionless robotic aliens, they’re showing a lot of spite for their former-friends.
Gwen... dang. Gotta admire her spirit. She fought to the end. Okay, now I’m hoping to see Cameron in a new iron suit. It’d be fitting, fighting the Xoro like that (maybe even Gwen, considering she’s the executioner). I can’t help but wonder if Courtney wanted that, considering her and Gwen’s damaged friendship.
And Heather and Duncan? Sheesh. First, he dates his ex-girlfriend’s best friend. Now, he might be dating his new ex’s old enemy.
I can’t wait for the next chapter.

There's something you should have done with Hearher after the disclaimer...

"I want the tape! Give me that tape! Ugh, how do you open this thing?"

Bridgette dying was amazingly done and now our group has goal. Find Duncan and save Courtney but nothing is that easy.

Not bad so far. Not many Total Drama fanfics like this out there (that I know of, anyway).
It figures Courtney would be the enemy leader. She is very controlling, after all. Also, sending the Xoro message via letter just felt personal, especially for a former CIT. And I'm not surprised she wants Duncan. Hehe.
I rather enjoyed the bond between DJ, Geoff, and Bridgette. It's a real shame Bridgette's, as far as anyone can tell, gone. If there is some good in her still, getting through is clearly going to take more than a standard love-based trope.
I'm not surprised Cameron was the first person Gwen thought about when the group split. Those two had each other's backs in All-Stars. If she'd want anyone by her side in a crisis, it'd probably be that guy. (On a side-note, I really like their chemistry, be it friendship or potential romance).
I look forward to the next chapter.

So Bridgette still lives? Well, that's good. Hopefully there can be a safe way to turn the Xoro-fied contestants back to normal; otherwise, that'll suck for the lot of them.

Well that blows. Having Geoff kill Bridge so soon was a waste of a good storyline. Maybe its just that I like her more but I would’ve let Bridgette live and either have Geoff die or escape. Killing her off now just seems anticlimactic especially when I feel like you be showing off how strong the enemy is at this point.

Great chapter! I have a feeling the other group of teens are still alive. However I feel Geoff might have a hard time coming to the realization that Bridgette is part of the Xoro.

Thank you for acknowledging my request this chapter was amazing and DJ did a good job calling everyone to leave. I can't wait for what is next to come on this great series. (Also is this based off a book or TV show because if not your a natural at coming up with things like Xoro because that is unique.

Duncan's in for a shock when he sees who Kyora really is.

so could you make kyora prime turn someone a kyora that would be awesome and also draw out her that would be awesome

Me again! Great chapter but could I recommend the next person you do a chapter on! It would be DJ also keep up the great work!

Great job! I love this chapter and the transformation was really cool! I hope you update this!