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  Anonymous chapter 132 . 8/30/2018 It was at this point Luna knew... she fucked up. sounds like Luna is in deep shit... also... WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH LUNA? IS SHE OUT OF HER MIND?! WE ALL KNOW DAMN WELL JACKSON CAN EASILY KICK HER ASS WHEN HE’S PISSED! I could be misunderstanding for all I know Luna had nothing to do with it... I want to think that the Lunar Guard was acting on his/her own accord cause I like Luna and also ,seeing as she likes Jackson and as Celestia’s son he’s practically family to her, I can’t see Luna ordering her Guard to kill Jackson and his wife.. however... if it turns out that she did in fact give the order... all I can say is she BETTER have one hell of an excuse for this...She does realize he WILL KILL anyone who is a threat to him and Shadow... ESPECIALLY when Shadow and Aliya are involved... right? He has proven to have no restraint when it comes to combat. Seriously .. if Shadow had died right on the spot... he would have lost his shit and outright killed her on the spot along with the Guard(s) responsible for the attack. Good cliffhanger and chapter as always.. can’t wait to see how Luna gets out of this mess. |
 ShiningShadow1965 chapter 132 . 8/13/2018 This is going to be very interesting when things are laid out and Luna involved? I can't wait to find out what happens and the birth of five eggs from Hydra now things are getting a bit complicated at this point bravo. |
| Totem-Mimikyu chapter 132 . 8/13/2018 Yay! And update! So far, so great. although if i was in Jackson's place, I wouldve turned Shadow away. I stand firmly by the belief that if you dump someone, you dont deserve to have them back |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 131 . 7/27/2018 Well you delivered and the rain stopped thank you I hope it will last for a little bit bravo. |
| Anonymous chapter 131 . 7/26/2018 Now we all we need is Umbra to return and the whole gang will be back together |
| Anonymous chapter 131 . 7/26/2018 SHADOWS BACK BITCHES! I was wondering when you would bring her back. Also I’m a little confuse... The changling are a hive mind.. Chrysalis being their Queen lays the eggs... so if Hydra lays eggs... does that make her a Queen of a new Hive? Biologically speaking that is... i am aware there’s another way to make changlings... they put ponies in cacoons and convert them and perhaps that’s how Chrysalis has been doing it but in Hydras case wouldn’t she be a Queen? Maybe I’m over thinking this... but I’m happy that Shadow and Aliya is back. |
| Totem-Mimikyu chapter 131 . 7/26/2018 Nice. I've been looking forward to this |
| Anonymous chapter 130 . 7/23/2018 I’m starting to get worried. It must be really serious for him/her not to post for so long. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 130 . 7/8/2018 Oh God Hydra a mom? Ok as the saying goes *what a twist* bravo. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 129 . 7/8/2018 Well I think at this point Jackson is going to do what he wants to do bravo, onward. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 128 . 7/8/2018 He is going dark prince of chaos Discord is the culprit for sure I just know it bravo, onward. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 127 . 7/8/2018 Again you put so much unfairness towards Jackson I'm angry at you bravo, onward. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 126 . 7/8/2018 Oh no I feel the racism bubbling up joy bravo, onward. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 125 . 7/8/2018 Great fantastic a changeling really wonderful bravo, onward. |
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 124 . 7/8/2018 Oh no what the hell is going on with this stuff now let's go on bravo, onward. |
