your really make me invested in this great story

Good chapter. The scientists reaction to their encounter with Abyssal destroyer is good.

Great story so far.

The only regret is that Richard EAGLE was not an F-15 pilot...please tell me you get the joke.

great story hope you continue

Good stuff. Can't wait to see the humanoid abyssal make there appearance.

btw the abyssal Technicolor Eyes: Generally, how they tell the difference in their ranks. Otherwise, everyone is assumed to have them by default.

Glowing Eyelights of Undeath: Every one has glowing eyes, although there is a lot of guessing that the ships were previously sunken ships.
Red Eyes, Take Warning: All Elite variants and major bosses have red eyes. They even glow brightly as they attack.
Supernatural Gold Eyes: Flagship rank, the even stronger variants of common mooks, are denoted by gold eyes.
Glowing Eyes of Doom: And the most recent introduction of remodeled Flagship rank enemies. One of their eyes glows blue on top of their golden aura.

Some of the author note were lost. Good chapter...

Good fic. Can't wait to see the ship girls being summoned/developed...

Trust me man, I got through the first few chapters much easier than this one cus it's been so long since this fic was updated, I forgot all the characters and the settings and everything :P
Next time a new chapter comes out I'm reading the whole thing again from the beginning

First, I want to commend you on a well written story so far. It is great! The buildup and background is excellent. Your writing style pulls the reader in and keeps it interesting.

One suggestion - correct the naval ranks of the characters. As a U.S. Marine Corps veteran, these stuck out to me. But others may not have caught them.

Taylor Emerson - should be Captain Emerson (capital C - naval rank level 0-6).

Nickolas Amos - rank should be Lieutenant Commander (naval rank 0-4). Would be called 'commander'. Lieutenant is too low for him to be the executive officer.

Quartermaster Walter Cavan - would likely be a Master Chief (naval rank E-9). Would be referred to as 'Chief', not 'officer'.

And of course, whenever you mention the Marines, use a capital 'M'. :)

Keep up the great writing! I look forward to future chapters.

Pretty good chapter. About the chapters, best leave it at 5000 words or so.

This is well written chapter. USA announcing a captured destroyer and engaging a cruiser fleet. Wonder why the Abyssals haven't send in subs?

Nice story, with good developments. The battle scene is quite nicely done, with enough blood and gore to show off the brutality, yet enough hope and victory in the end. The Abyssals are shown to be able becoming stealth under radar and blocking satellites communication, I wonder how we Humans would counter that.

The reactions of the navy commanders are also fit. Measured worry and they have absolutely no idea on how to deal with the issues at hand.

However, the minor detail on China having to copy USA is a bit wrong - from what I've read on Quora, Chinese are making leaps and bounds in scientific and technology. I don't think they would need to rely on technical spies in 2020 to develop anymore.

And I wonder if you would feature Vietnamese People's navy here

I pick up your review on "Time Marches on" fanfiction, and I decide to take a look at your fic, especially when you set the scene in South China Sea (though we call it "East Sea") - I'm pretty sure that you understand why I get interested now.

The first chapter of yours is quite nice, especially when you describe the international politic situation. However, the minor detail where it is suggested that China would launch an attack on the carrier - it is practically suicidal for China, not in terms of manpower or technical, but in terms of diplomacy and politics.

Other than that, it is quite a nice beginning - the normalcy before everything goes straight to hell.

Pretty good story.

This is pretty good. I like the idea of aliens from the sea attacking humans. Question: Why do you need a beta anyway? It's well written. There are a few misspellings like rough when it should be rouge but other than that its a solid chapter. Hope this gets more reviews.