Reviews for Journey of the King: The Will of D
eddyp6326 chapter 3 . 7/8
Great story so far cant wait for next ch
One piecerules100 chapter 3 . 7/5
Hey I don't mean to be rude but it has been over a year since the last update so I was wondering if the story has been abandoned or you just have a writer's block.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 6/28
skipped ahead. your enemies are weak trash. which makes the story the same.
Tony McNucklz chapter 2 . 6/28
Not even halfway through this chapter and i have to stop and tell you I'm bored. you OP'd the fuck out of luffy, and you're doing it to the crew as well. good stories are measured by the obstacles the MCs overcome. and because you OP'd them, the canon obstacles have been rendered into ants to be walked over absent effort. which. is. BORING.
no struggle, no risk, and no stakes makes for a dull read. as exemplified by buggy. why would a an experienced roger pirate be that weak? how could he possibly not have faced anyone that would try non-slashing damage? how is it possible that he has never had to fight against others that could see such an obvious way around his powers and never come up with a counter to it? it's lazy writing. worse it nerfs the enemy, and when you make the opponents that easy you don't care about the protagonist. as an analogy, when you play a video game, say Halo, which playthrough sticks in your memory: Easy where you blitzed through the game without a single death or moment of stress, or Legendary, where you clawed and strategized and felt your heart actually jump in the real world during the fights. when you felt real-world relief and accomplishment when you won a fight much less cleared a level.
it's the same with stories. sitting here watching luffy and co. pl aying on Very Easy is utterly uninteresting. skills being grinded like an RPG, massive power boosts in a few days of dodgeball and pushups, it's just dull. and when a boss fight finally came, you Golden Gunned the boss in full Easy Button mode. opportunity wasted.
Watking2462 chapter 3 . 6/22
Please update
MisterVoorhees chapter 3 . 6/22
I really hope you continue with your story can’t wait for the baratie arc and especially when luffy takes down arlong!
MisterVoorhees chapter 3 . 6/20
Please update!
Jekke604 chapter 3 . 6/15
I really like your story, it's well written and the story line is interesting enough. So I go back to waiting till you write the next chapter.

Thx for the chapter

Grts Jekke604
spirouFr chapter 3 . 6/10
thanks for this story
Reaperdan81 chapter 3 . 5/15
It’s just so damn good ,wish there was more to read .hopefully we get more at some point in the near future
Reaperdan81 chapter 2 . 5/14
I genuinely did not think you could beat the first chapter,but you did .For me ,it does not get better than this.
Reaperdan81 chapter 1 . 5/13
Wow ,that was a high quality chapter right there,can’t think of one thing I did not like ,hope it carries on next chapter.
kylekatarn77 chapter 3 . 5/12
Looking forward to the next incredible chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/8
Another awesome chapter, I await more ,one day hopefully.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7
What can be said , one of the best individual chapters I have ever read and you should be damn proud of it ,the only problem I have is that it’s nearly done
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