| Reviews for On The Bus |
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   Msdib chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 I live Tony’s bus friends! |
| Ayjah chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 Gem of a story. Lovely |
| earthdragon chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 Great story. Personally, I would have thought that Gibbs was easier to understand than Tony. He's pretty straightforward really, once you get past the gruff exterior he shows at work and the fact that he doesn't like talking about his late wife and child. Tony, on the other hand is a chameleon. |
| charli911 chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 Excellent story! I could definitely see Tony doing this! |
| megamom2 chapter 1 . 12/28/2017 Wonderful original characters in a light-hearted tale! |
| BuckeyeFan00000 chapter 1 . 12/26/2017 What a lovely story! I really liked that Ellie GOT Tony on the show. Her insights and kindness when they went to his old military academy high school was very pleasing to me and I miss their semi-secret friendship. You write Ellie very well. I am still watching BUT I rarely re-watch anymore. The show is still fine but nowhere near the show it was Seasons 1-6. BF |
| shadocat chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 Oh I love this story! Just perfect. I always enjoyed Tony and Ellie. He was different with her and she did seem to get him, even though things did go off the rails with his relationships with almost everyone else. Merry Christmas to you and thank you for the pleasure of reading your wonderful stories. :) |
| Mezzo Beev chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 What a delightful follow up to your previous story! I like that you’ve had Tony continue to hang out with his bus buddies and that when Ellie did her snooping it resulted in her being included into the gang. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 Love it! Totally Tony and Ellie! |
| kensi54382 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 Sweet! I loved this so much! |
| JimChou chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 Well done! A good start for the Christmas holidays! |
| Lic. Lu chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 I loved it! This is one that I would love to see expanded. It |
| VG LittleBear chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 Hi, a Merry Christmas to you, your family, and your readers! This was the perfect Christmas gift, Tony connecting people on the bus. Good to see them still looking out for Tony, too. I wish I could join the party! Lol for Ellie the glutton, she can eat all that and NOT thicken in the waist. *sigh* ;) And the song, I'll never forget it as I heard Gibbs sing it while heading out with the team, something Ellie has yet to encounter. The green slopes had me detour to Wikipedia. I grew up with blue, red, and black slopes, just learned about the other colors. Thank you for all the lovely stories you wrote this year! Thanks and cheers! |
| Maunzeli chapter 1 . 12/21/2017 Thanks for the lovely Christmas gift! Happy Christmas! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2017 You truly made happy with little story... the meaning of x-mas...Thank you |
