Oh my goodness, this is my second time through this story and it was every bit as captivating as the first time through. Beautifully written, unique and immersive - thank you for sharing your gifts with us readers in this story!

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! This has most certainly been the single most creative story I’ve ever read! I can’t explain how much I adore and love this story! It is wildly beautiful and funny and heartwarming and awe-inducing! I don’t have enough words for this story. Marinette’s Will was just inspiring, Adrien working his hardest through the hardest of times was just so human and genuine and sweet. Hawkmoth at the end... man... I loved that he sacrificed himself but still in the end he was still himself. UGH! This story is TOO MUCH! Tikki and Plagg were written beautifully. They were just excellent. The first alley scene got
Me hooked so hard. Every moment of this story was wonderful. Thank yo Igor all your time and dedication to this masterpiece.

Absolutely amazing. Super creative, well thought out, sweet, suspenseful, beautifully written, cleanly edited and an absolutely addicting story that I thoroughly enjoyed and will definitely reread. Thank you! The whole concept of this world was amazing, if it still appeals to you I would love to read more stories written in it. If this is the end, than great job, it is a superb story with a fantastic ending! Thanks again!

Wow! That was a piece of art. Beautiful writing! Beautiful story!

As if you're in any position to boss around anyone. Much less Plagg. /snorts

Rich blond brats.

I need a drink. God this fucking piece of shit. I could be fucking drunk but i wouldn't be as stupid as this kid

I was hoping she'd at least reach one of them before but uhghhhhh /lays down to cry

I love love loved this story - thank you so much for writing it! Definitely kept me on my toes :) any chance of a sequel?

awesome story! have you thought about publishing it? you know there is a site that can print out your fanfiction for a small fee. you should check it out!

nice start! I like anti-utopian stories. like the divergent, or feral. I giggled at the alley scene, nice!

...so...cute... I love the ending!

Okay, this is easily the best Miraculous AU fix I have read. Thank you for this amazing story!

This is a really interesting story and seems well written. My only critique is the large info dump at the beginning of this chapter. While the background knowledge is important, info dumps can take people out of the story. I have always been told that its better to show rather then tell, revealing that knowledge within the story, overtime, with context clues and dialogue. The less info dumps the better.

Great story! I loved itthank you for writing and sharing it!

Dude! Change the names, the animals they morph into, and maybe the setting. And you've got yourself an original sci-fi piece that I think you could totally publish. DO IT! It was amazing from beginning to end. I stayed up an hour past my bedtime to finish it. Nice work!

As soon as I read “It was her,” I pictured his world going into slow motion and all the noise around him hushing...