Can't wait for the update :

Wow, shuichi killing huh. I like how this story is going

I have to say I really love what you have so far.
Learning about where Shuichi's mindset came and how he met Miu is really powerful to me and really well written. Also I find it funny that it's Shuichi's fault that Miu became such dirty-minded curser. I wonder, are you going to change anyone else's backstory?
I also really like how Shuichi and Ryoma are becoming friends due to their similar mindset. I'm really looking forward to how some character interactions change due Shuichi's character and beliefs being different from cannon, especially if Angie's student council is included in the story.
As for pairings, personally I have to go with either KaedexShuichi or Harem. My reasons being that Kaede didn't know Shuichi before the killing game, so the slow reveal of each other's past would definitely make things interesting, as they might not fully understand what they'er getting into. It would also be interesting if Shuichi learns about Kaede's desire to kill the mastermind, as it would mean they have similar mind views, but would probably react differently to the reveal of Maki's real talent. I'm also curious what the draw for them to start a relationship would be, as in cannon Kaede help Shuichi get over his insecurities, but this Shuichi is already confident in his abilities, so maybe Kaede will help him in trusting others more and not to be so judgmental.
As for the harem, I can't deny the chemistry that Shuichi has with Miu, but my question is where can they go from here? Miu clearly trusts Shuichi and the only thing I see at the moment making their relationship by itself intriguing, is if Miu try to kill someone, which I highly doubt would happen unless she can bring Shuichi with her, or it's to take out someone she doesn't see as innocence. But if it were a harem, I can easily see Miu doubting herself about whether she's enough to make Shuichi happy, or questioning whether it's a good idea to bring an outsider like Kaede into their plans and lives. It could lead to the girls becoming friends and developing together to be better people. As for Tenko, I honestly see her only being in a relationship with Shuichi if there's a Harem. I can see her worrying a bout Kaede and Miu both being in a relationship with someone like Shuichi at the same time, but by interacting with them they become friends, and through friendship with Miu and Kaede, Tenko is able to make amends with Shuichi. But those are just my personal thoughts.
I'm really excited to see what happens next, and how Shuichi choosing not to tell Kaede about the secret door will affect the upcoming murder and trial. This is an amazing story so far. Keep up the great work!

Repeating myself from AO3, REALLY want to see Miu/Shuichi. I've checked, this would be the first serious/non-oneshot(smut or otherwise) fic on EITHER site that actually has that ship.

Keep up the good work! :)

Ooo some decent filler and a good miu x saihara interaction which cements my vote for the miu x saihara pairing so I look forward to what else you change other then attitudes will there different deaths more gruesome executions only you know

Hey Fire Slash I am a Big! fan of your work! You have such a creative mind! Keep up the good work! But if you don't mind I have a little request for you! What if Kiibo instead of being a robot he was a bounty hunter? So in this case he has more of a maki personality? sorry if this is werid! But 4real Great Job!

Hopefully it won't take as long for you to post chapter 3 as it did chapter 2, 'cause the story just got more interesting.

Now back to Fesity Crimestopper Boi Shuichi.

Keebo Abuse! Shuichi has joined Kokichi in the Keebo Eviceration Korps.

Tenko's trying to get Shuichi to leave Kaede alone. She's clearly jealous!

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Ok so. ... I'm really enjoying the new shuichi as the protagonist . despite his lack of maturity and salty mouth , I find him easily more likable than the canon shuichi , who is always kinda naive , self-doubting and weak so as to say. which while it might make him more interesting to develop but I wasn't the biggest fan of his, this shuichi's stark contrast really makes me enjoy him a whole lot more.
for the ship I guess mostly kaede but since I don't know much about this tenko, I won't rule her out yet. miu , I think would work better as a friends with benefitsheavy emphasis on friendscompared to as a romantic pairing since their personalities are way to similar for a cohesive ship. I would however like to have shuichi to have casual sex with miu occasionally but neither of them ever do it for love but just to let out steam or if they are horny . It would help exemplify how shuichi plays by his own rules and doesn't really follow typical societal customs by sleeping with his friend for no reason but the heck of it . plus seeing kaede and the others reacting to such a scene like both shuichi and miu are late for breakfast so they all go to see , only to open shuichis door which was open from miu entering to see the both of them right in the middle of sex . it would be utterly priceless.
Ik I wrote a lot but I really am enjoying this story a whole lot and really can't wait for the next chapter

Heh. I know the feeling of finally being able to get back into the swing of things. Great chapter and I'm forward to more.

Well, this is a refreshing plot twist.
A hardboiled Saihara can bring some pretty interesting developments, I just want to ask-no, to beg you: Don't ship him with Akamatsu please!
He's too intense for her and he might even corrupt her. Please don't!

Damn you Fire Slash!
You manage to make yet another story I REALLY wish to see the end of. The problem is I don't know which one I want to see next now! Thanks a lot you baka! n

I want to see a harem.

Tenko x Shuichi please, I haven't found a single normal one of that story. Kaede x Shuichi has a lot of stories, if you want that ship rather make it a spin-off or something like that. Miu x Shuichi seems pretty fun too, althought with Shuichi's current personality I'd find it a bit boring. Tenko x Shuichi would be really interesting tho and it could possibly be one of the first big ones, if you make this a long story and it could attract a lot of readers, wanting interesting ships. I'd say choose Tenko, but at the end of the day that is your decision. Great story, keep up the good work

Shuichi's not as dichtonomous as I pictured.

If there aren't vibrating female robots yet then we can surely count on Miu to build one eventually.

Keep going. You've got me interested.

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