Awwwwww, this was so adorable! I love Marco and Kelly together! They're just SO perfect! This fanfiction was great! I love all the emotion in it, and all the cute moments between Marco and Kelly!

Good fic I hope for more

This was awesome you should make more like it

A very touching and heart-warming story of friendship, a very enjoyable read.

Pretty cute. Would have liked to have seen more. Nice job.

Loved it!

I read this every time I feel kinda lost in life...I end up in a bitter-sweet charade hehe. Good work.

This is a fantastic story, and i am happy with what you have done with the characters. I find now more than ever a serious lack of good storys for my favourite ships. So if you feel motivated, if you continue this story how you have, and try tieing it back into canon events, and keeping this dynamic and dialouge, i think you could have yourself something really special. If you ever want advise or words of encuragement, simply pm me. Hope to see more soon.

Great story I love it

You did a wonderful job for your first fan fiction dude! I love the bond Marco and Kelly are forming on the show and you captured that perfectly in this story. I hope to see more awesome stories from you in the future!

I may like starco...but this is a amazing story 10/10. I would love if u cont this. And I already read it like 3 timez lol.

Nice fic, by the end it got too sweet, but it was worth it

this is frickin amazing! your writing is awesome! pls continue!

What a lovely little story. I really loved the way you handled all of the characters. They were all sympathetic, and they really felt like themselves. The scenes between Marco and Kelly, and especially the scene between Star and Kelly were all outstanding. Awesome work!

I cannot express how perfect this is. You have captured their character more than people who are die hard fans of this show. Like omg. This is so we'll written that it's gonna be hard for me to find a better fanfic to top it. Bravo, like seriously, kudos to you.

I hope you make a sequel, continuation, second chapter, or even another story in no way related. I would just absolutely LOVE to see more works from you. Good luck with any future stories! I'll read them ASAP!