Reviews for Coming Home |
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hi chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 nice i love it |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Well seeing as the fic is in English its strange you would even use honorifics when a simple Mom would fix all your worries. |
RosesAndThornsxo chapter 1 . 6/1/2018 Great lemon. you've definitely improved alot since mothers guilt. you definitely need to do more NaruKushi pairings or at least go back to Mothers Guilt. Also, it is spelt kaa-san and not ka-san but i personally find it better when an author uses the chan honorific as it is use to show affection |
ShatteredMetal chapter 1 . 3/26/2018 Wow, that's really something. Your description is really good and you can really imagine what the story tells. I wish I had more to say and give proper feedback but I'm reading this at night after a little migraine lol. Shattered. |
Gabriel Herrol chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 Very hot one shot. I love re-reading it when I got nothing else new to read. |
Shisoukengo chapter 1 . 3/14/2018 Nice smut, good job. And the honorific is accurate, as far as I know. |
daniel2610994 chapter 1 . 3/7/2018 It was pretty hot, that must have been the best welcome ever xD |
Silent Anu chapter 1 . 1/8/2018 Really good and awesome work. A bit of backstory would be good, and it's kaa-san. Personally I find the use of it really hot. But I think you should use Kaa-chan instead, Naruto didn't care about respect much (whichsan" is used for) andchan" is used for conveying affection, so that would suit Naruto more. Plz make a follow up part with kushina being pregnant but still getting banged. |
antifanboy chapter 1 . 1/5/2018 good lemon for an abnormal and meaningless couple. |
Rebmul chapter 1 . 1/1/2018 nothing quite like knockem up creampie incest sex |
King69 chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 Naruto fuck his mom ass and creampie her pussy. Great lemon |
pitbull4567 chapter 1 . 12/30/2017 What a story |
GrandAssassin chapter 1 . 12/29/2017 Great fic |
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 1 . 12/29/2017 Awesome chapter Can’t wait for more |
honter11 chapter 1 . 12/29/2017 I also like Naruto with his mother but thanks for the third and final chapter of a date but I a little more of Lemon It would have been great, I know there is is more fan of Narusaku and Naruhina please put more Naruino with Lemon it would great. Puedes poner tambien de Digimon un Michi (Tai-Mimi) o un trio de Taimiora (Tai-Mimi-Sora) put it for this year 2018. |