I really like how you have given them life and shown the differences between them. They are the same monster but have had two completely different masters.

I am glad that you made this story, so thank you.

I hope that Yugi earns the new Dark Magicians respect eventually. And that The new Dark Magician will realise that Yugi really does respect his cards and monsters.

Anyway, Loved this story :-)

I love it! Nice fic.

Really good job on this story!

I don't remember much of this episode, but I really like what you've done with it. This was a deep one shot; it shows the bond Dark Magician (Mahaado) shares with Yugi and how Yugi cares and respects his cards. It's very endearing to read.

You don't see many fics that incorporate the Dark Magician that Arcana used in Yugi's deck. Even in the show, it never showed Yugi getting the card, let alone ever using it. But it's nice to see that the Dark Magician will be going to a better home now.

Nice, even if it isn't totally canon, it still can fit and that is a major plus. I like the conversation, even though it's a little cliché, but then again, if it is your first story posted here... and it's been quite some time. Like it so far, now gonna read the sequel ;) ('cause I wanna see Yugi play Pandora's Magician!)

Lolchen

-smiles- I'm glad that Arcana's Dark Magician got away from that jerk of a master and into Yugi's caring hands. I'm surehe will be much happier (after beign accepted, but that will be interesting ans I'm sure that all of his cards are immensely protective of thier duelist)

Sweet! I like it. Nice Oneshot.

awesome

aw... that was, actually, really nice. I didn't really know what to expect when I read the summary, but this is heartwarming in a bittersweet way (although it's not really bittersweet, but for some reason I cannot put the feeling in words, so I'll have to make do with this horrible wording). I really like this story!

Aww! That was so sweet! - I think that you should aslo write the duel that Yugi gains Arcana's ex-DM's respect! That'd be so sweet. ~-~ Everytime I think of the two, I think "Brothers." Don't ask. *Giggles* But that's what they appear to be to me. '

I'm very impressed with this story. I watched that paticular episode a lot lately, mostly due to the fact that I am trading with a friend of mine on-line for her copy of the Japanese (red or Evil) Dark Magician. I believe there is no way of improving this story because it's so incredible. raw emotion, good battling with evil constantly, even though they have already fought on the field and ended up in the graveyard. I did not expect evil to side with good, but I am glad that it did happen. Thanks.

That was really good. Respect does get more help than intimidation.

I LOVE YOUR FIC! It was really interesting, well-written and I think, rather insightful!

YAY! That was just plain cool!