hes dead.

WAO What's the point of having future knowledge if you can't even use it lile WAO Bravo

So we replace Skill with plot armor? Cool

Damn a week Hope he doesn't die fingers crossed though cuz he sure as hell will

If The Mc even forgets the plot of the game then wth is his use here Cannon fodder?Smh

WHO in their right mind question their CO? That being Freya who's obviously a veteran and this Dude here keeps complaining, Dude not being stupid is NOT a sign of being a Gary-stu.

Avoiding Stu-ness doesn't mean he has to be am idiot because afaik no normal person (Mike) would go with he sheperds without proper training and Experience

Awww sucks that he didn't die, wish he did though and gets turned into a observer ghost that would follow them because of his regrets, shame. 1 question tho is this guy an idiot? No rational normal person would go into these things WITHOUT training ,what is he starved for affection? Hell Subaru did this and the only thing that kept him alive is the curse. Unbelievable

It was going to be either Freya or Robin if you ask me and now I'm guessing it's a Freya and that Phoebe is likely their child, unless I'm screwing up my guess and some of the future parents survived remarried and all that crap because that sorta stuff does happen. If it turns out that Phoebe is the abviously different named child of a couple we already know I will be embarrassed for not remembering them hahaha.

Oh god did Lon Qu believe "Marth" actually was a woman and win? Leading them to continue on as champion!

Huh you write a male character well no offence meant to other writers but it just doesn't feel write slotting myself into their place as it does with your character.

Huh jealousy? Seems a bit to soon honestly even if Chrom did save your life. By the way love the whole genderbend situation it's unique and not handled in a cringes way and the characters actually feel a bit more fleshed out such as when Frederick/Freya decided to make sweet love to your face with the business end of a gauntlet, after the provoking comments.

The whole Sumner thing confuses me I don't understand why they get so angry with them myself, but then again your character doesn't either so maybe an effect from dimension travel or their voice/stutter hits just the right pitch too grate on your hearing.

I only found this story a little bit ago, but it was an amazingly good binge read. I definitely didnt expect it to be nearly as good as it was, not that I expected it to be bad. Just loving what you've done, and looking forward to what you will.

would make that a pretty fair possibility. Especially if he does okay, or dare I say, good with the lance. Also not something I've seen super often in the few stories I've read about Fire Emblem only one other person has sort of gone calvary, but none have gone for the pegasi.

Sorry about the split "review". Phone slipped, and accidentally hit send. Also this "review" was made before reading the full chapter.