This was an interesting story, for sure. I love the bigger picture of the gatekeepers and how Hermione is involved. Great story!

This was an excellent read. Thank you so much for writing it, I enjoyed it the whole way through. It was my first Hermione is related to Voldemort fic and.. honestly I kind of wanted her to go full dark at once point because she took to it SO well. But also your ending was satisfying as well and I love it!

Brilliant

Loved this! Was really surprised by the ending. Did not see that coming at all. I loved it very much.

Is this finished now? Will there be the final chapter as stated at the bottom?

Enjoying a reread.

Liked this:
'She had a feeling the dark witch liked having a secret of Hermione's that not one else had.

One that belonged to only her.'

If Wendell was 16 years old at 1943, he would have been around 52 when Hermione was born. Seems a tad older than intended.

Anyway, I thought the fic was pretty decent up to around chapter 10-11, where it kinda went off the deep end a bit. In my opinion I think it might have been better to skip that last arc and jump straight to epilogue. I hope this didn't come of as too harsh

When I started reading, I had no idea you made the Black sisters the same age/year as everyone else, or that it was generally an AU fic (the uncle Riddle was a big surprise haha). So at first I was very confused as to how well-known-and-wanted-death-eater Bellatrix got into Hogwarts without anyone noticing, especially on Dumbledore’s watch. Even though I eventually realized this was an AU, I ended up figuring out a hypothetical way death eaters could sneak into the castle (other than the vanishing cabinets) all thanks to this story. So now I want to write a story with this idea in mind, but I probably won’t ‘cause I’m too lazy.

This is a very good fanfic. The only thing I didn't really like was the jumping back and forth on the times; however very good story.

Great Chapter! Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it!

OH MY GOD! YES! A NEW COMPLETED BELLAMIONE FIC! What a time to be alive! Hahahaha. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I will be finishing this today and the first chapter already looks promising. I do hope that Hermione is dark or at least grey in this fic. I hope she's the type to know that there's no black and white in war, just shades of grey. I'M READY TO GET INVESTED IN THIS FIC! THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! It's been so long since I read something new and completed in the Bellamione fandom.

Dumbledore you son of a...well I knew he was a manipulative person, didn't think it could go to such an extent. I liked the way you included the four founders and their jobs, also making Hermione a gatekeeper was a good idea, she will do a hell of a job. Hermione's confession was really sweet, I had a smile on my face while reading it. And what can I say of the last part, absolutely adorable! I can see they have been working hard in the children department (if you know what I mean hahahhaa) Wonderful chapter, kind of sad that this story is about to end but also really happy for having had the pleasure to read it.

I'm disappointed in that chapter you turn Hermione in to Mary Sue, and don't get me wrong i really enjoyed this story but you try to explain that place when Dumbeldore meet with Harry and your fiction with Hermione make more mess then actually explain anything. And then come Bellatrix when at the beginning she was authentic as younger version of original just sway to the light side in the and she became a good housewife when Hermione become Superman of her universe and that destroy dynamic between them. Overall this chapter it's cheesy and im disappointed in the way you build up Hermione and Bellatrix and that ruin my day because i was hoping for that story stay as good as it was at the beginning when it makes me wait for more through those last month's. I apologize for any language and grammar mistakes i made but English isn't my first language so deal with it...

so good thank you love the story

Another excellent chapter. I must defend Bella in her inability to respond with a proper answer to Hermione's heartfelt confession, it happens that when someone says so many beatiful things and you know they are speaking from their hearts that your brain just stop fuctioning properly. I'm glad that Cissy can have a chance to have a normal life and that Bella and Andy could spend some quality time. I liked the way you ended Salazar, how Hermione fought the dark magic inside of her and instead used her feelings for her loved ones to win. I wasn't expecting Albus to appear again and now I'm curious to know what really is his purpose. One again wonderful chapter and can't wait for more