Hmmm. I like the story, but Rey isn't someone to parade around naked like in earlier chapters. And she isn't a slut like you're clearly making her be. Distraction? Having sex to dull the loneliness-that's just trashy behavior and Rey is many things but trash. Not to mention how stupid it would be for her to whore around on jakku-no healthcare, no protection and you can't trust anyone. And how is Luke dead here? Who killed him and his padawans? Kylo? Not likely, even if he was grieving. Honestly, both Rey and Kylo are OOC in this story.

Man, I hope you update this story! It's great! I want to see what happens! Please update?

I am 100% for this, but I see that it's probably been abandoned. I'll fave & follow anyone. Fingers crossed you pick this back up some day. I would LOVE to see how this continues.

What a marvelous story! I'm totally digging it and hope you update soon.

I'm loving this rewrite! Can't wait to read more.

you gon update?

Great story.

Love this story so far! Thank you for sharing it with us! Looking fw to reading more as you can post it.

Why does this not have more favs? This is so well written :)

A truly intriguing take on things. Hope you return to this some day because I'd love to see where this is heading.

I love this! update please! your Ben is so intriguing:)

I hope you'll update this story too, I really like it. :)

You are getting him dirty, go away - with that one line you perfectly capture the simplicity of Ray, not to mention just how powergul she is. Awesome chapter, bravo! Loved it 3

Great chapter!

Damn , that was some serious drink