DOPPEL! DOPPEL! DOPPEL!

That aside, her Doppel form would be interesting to see. Somewhat like "Ein Roter Drache" perhaps?

I know you're going through things, and I hope everything will be okay!

OMG!
I did not know about this fanfic.
Very good job as always!

I love little moments like this.

Yes! I love this so much. Please keep up the wonderful ideas. I ship them but just having scenes like this is perfect~

Ya, next level mindfuck with where Yuzu was is DAMN accurate.

Writing how time travel effects character development can produce interesting results. Will one hypothetical Karin decide to actually kiss Toushiro 'for science'? And include notes about it for her future incarnation?

Next loop we're gonna see Ichigo calling her 'professor' and her looking at him like a deer in the headlights, right?

Yeah, Karin getting antsy due to the circumstances is pretty understandable, as is her frustration at basically being kept in reserve. And I can easily see most of the ones who got their future journals having their imagination running wild about the most dramatic moments of the last timeline. Text can only convey so much.

I have to say, as someone who only half-watched the Bleach anime (I favoured the manga instead) and didn't read that many fics for that fandom, the way Toshiro and Karin interact is pretty interesting. I especially liked the 'translation' of their text exchange. Fluent sarcasm, you said? Seems like a convenient language to learn.

All in all, I'm really liking those 'not quite main-story material, yet good emotional scenes and character interactions' those chapters provide. Great job, and glad that you seem to be doing better!

A really nice chapter. ...Now I want to go back and reread. But I don't have time to do that! Ugh. Dilemmas Dilemmas.

*dammit Cori how are you so good at making me cry*
*fuckin’ hell*
...
I’m not joking, you know. Your story consistently evokes powerful emotions that I can’t seem to find almost anywhere else, no matter how many times I read it. It’s honestly inspiring. Thank you for this little insight into how Karin’s not as together as she seems, but is doing everything she can to seem that way so Homura has a rock to lean on.

This was really sweet. I love how powerful an existence you make each character in your stories; each one is as wonderfully human as they are truly heroic. Thank you for sharing your hard work with us!

good job! It is quite touching to see these moments of everyday life for this series

Can you please stop usingxxfor scene breaks I've got bad eyes and I use a text-to-speech engine to listen to your stories and these are very annoying to hear the things saying section X section X section X every time there's a scene break if you can do this thanks if not I'll try to find a better text-to-speech engine that can block it out thanks and god bless you.

Undertalefags love shit like this, but never have they made it feel like serious business. Never have they made it deep enough to hook anyone wandering in.