Very good. It like the idea of that twist with his mother surviving to join the Resistance. You should write a story on that :)

Thrawn appreciation week is every week! Great story, I will have to check out your others.

I have to say your symbolism of the first order is accurate. A child base off of child emotions. The latest movie proves that. Sure the first order is strong but it pales in comparison to all of the Empire. If only they did not put all of their ships on Jakku then the empire will most likely still be alive.

Well done.

Omg, i've read your newest stories on Archiwe, and wow! :D
All of your fic are brilliant, creative and amazing, but this one is perfect, and this line: "Go. And stay away from the Chiss realm." - the best line ever! :D
I enjoyed reading all of your fics, and i have to say that your interpretation of Thrawn is absolutely epic, you achieved ideal balance between Thrawn's character from EU stories and from new canon verse! Thank you! :)

Way to go, Thrawn! Eli will do a far better job raising the kid than Sloane and Brendol ever will, great call there. :)