You know, she should have stayed

I guess you already saw episode 13. I did the same and great Oum, this was worth basically all the three Volumes made since Monty's death(of course i liked a lot of fights since then, but this...). You made a very well job into describing Raven's tought and the reactions of her team to Yang's birth. Honestly i hope Raven will suffer soon as possible, but i can't say she isn't an awesome chapter and also in this this fic is very good. Keep up the good work and see you later, good year.

You just predicted the Chapter 13’s cliffhanger, about Yang and Raven.

AWESOME!