What a story. Such a unique and interesting path you've created. So many new, interesting perspectives and such massive character development - for everyone.

I can't wait to see the continuation. Any part of this new world is interesting to read about. Fantastic work.

awesome yo, imo give a bit more to magic, arcane, etc. Demonstrate how to use those tools. also abrupt ending, like off a cliff into nothingness

Not even 10 chapters in but I already hate Dumby . Disgusting hypocrite

A great fic. Some odd grammar issues in the later chapters but the story itself is very engaging and seems new to me.

You asked for a review. All I can say is that is all around excellent, so good in so many ways that it just seems perfect, or as near as someone like me can see.

I’m left thinking that you need someone properly educated in writing to be worthy of commenting on this.

Loving your story so far, but “in a coma somewhere” made this sublime.

Oh, this entire work was beautiful! I know it's abandoned and won't ever be completed, but I love the way you've worked this with the Source and the colours that he sees. Thank you so much for writing! :)

~Trixie

*continued from another review posted too soon

How much I genuinely love your writing, in both this and elementals power. You, and writers like you (I wish there were more), are the reasons I read fanfiction at all

Literally one of my all time favourite fan fictions, read it at least 3 times and each time I’ve only ended up praying you’d write more of it. I have to give you props as the writer, where most fan fiction writers write poorly or have a mediocre story, you have neither issue present in your work and in this especially, I found it captivating. Now I see it’s abandoned In the description, I’m stuck between hoping someone adopts it and completes it, and dreading the possibility that someone will adopt it and their writing will be far inferior to your own. Take this as like an anti-flame, I don’t have any actual useful feedback, but I just want to emphasise how much

What will Harry do with the knowledge of Atlantis if he gets it?

What a disappointment. I had gone through a list of stories I enjoyed that hadn't been updated and I saw this... I'm not sure why you chose to give it up for adoption but it doesn't matter. I would just like to say that I appreciate you writing this. I have always been a fan of this story. You have inspired me. Made me think and helped me be an, if not better, a more thoughtful human being. I wish you success in all of your other ventures and I hope that you never lose that thoughtfulness.

Kind Regards
Acausal Trilby

Shut up fucking bitch! Yeah is you "Guest chapter 35 i am a little pussy and a piece of shite". This story is fucking awesome. Even more incredible than your mother's screams when I broke into her last night, Guest. This fanfic is a work of art so if you are a new reader ignore certain sluts in the comments and go read. May the mother of Guest 35 die choking on my dick if it isn't true.

Why the fuck was this abandoned this amazing why like why wtf I'm angry right now I never saw abandoned tag omg mannnnn fuck this was great I love this Harry he's amazing he condemned the whole world

This is a f*cking fantastic chapter and you know it.

fucking love it.