Reviews for Sweetie's Frenemy
daisybanner4 chapter 4 . 1/10
Has this story ended?
SharpDragonKlaw chapter 4 . 1/15/2019
Nice to see this story again after so long. Great chapter by the way I'm interested to see how and why Sweetie is tied up.
commander ash chapter 4 . 1/15/2019
Great a update thought this was abandoned
commander ash chapter 3 . 9/3/2018
It’s doing really well please update
NovaAce chapter 3 . 5/18/2018
Oh, I'm loving the story so far. Can't say I'm not hooked. I'm currently thinking of an idea for this story's finale, where Ryder and the pups, including Marshall and Everest were all captured, meaning Sweetie and Mayor Humdinger wins, but Chase, still week has to save them. But, being week he doesn't prove as affective, and Sweetie feels bad for him, turning on Humdinger and good prevails evil, although Sweetie eventually shrugs it off, giving an excuse to make sure they didn't get any ideas for why she saved them in the first place.

But that's just an idea :P
wrldqueek chapter 2 . 4/13/2018
You know, raining fish actually isn't impossible. It's happened before, the current theory is that waterspouts (tornados that touch down on water) pull them up and can drop them miles away.

wiki/Rain_of_animals

That said, a natural phenomenon would not be localized to city hall.
SharpDragonKlaw chapter 3 . 4/12/2018
Great chapter.
Griffin Stone chapter 2 . 1/29/2018
I feel like you are foreshadowing Rocky doing something big? Maybe its just me.
Oh, boy, Sweetie and Humdinger working together? What could possibly go wrong?
joelbissainthe chapter 2 . 1/29/2018
I like the story so far? Please continue
SharpDragonKlaw chapter 2 . 1/29/2018
I hope Chase gets better soon. I wonder just what Humdinger and Sweetie got planned.
SharpDragonKlaw chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
I am interested to see how this goes.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2018
i predict it's humdingger
Titanflame chapter 1 . 1/15/2018
good start. I can't wait to read the next chapter