I'm a bit disappointed really. A story full of good ideas, ruined by rushing everything.

Hooray

In this chapter alone, someone flew into a pillar four times.

Am i the only one who dies a bit for every "the figure did" in the first chapter? i mean c'mon after the first time we know it's the focus, a simple he did this and then that would do you wonder

This is beautiful! Can't wait for sequel!

that was a cute date it was funny when that chick was trying to hit on natsu and messed up the cheese cake and what erza did haha also that part with dragons why would he admit laxus is stronger then him if he gonna be beating him next chapter also why would he even count fake slayer that doesnt go by the same rules (you think a dragon king or a demon would mess with that only one girl thing lols) and a nice relaxing dip in a pond with a water fall and end the night with sleeping next to each other

something odd is going on with edolas it seems that was what happened in canon but this isnt canon whats going on (speaking off since natsu didnt get happy's egg no one should have since he was the only one to go into that forest and the only one that would grab that egg like the other 100 eggs that no one knows what happened to that didnt get found by the slayer they were sent to kill (protect) or does that have to do with why that was there is this like a second go through the timeline but only on earthland and edolas is the same but no one in the current story knows

laxus is back and has started his shit but wait if he walked into the guild how the hell is he gonna get out you know the whole age trap and he well over 400 years old even older then the other dragon slayer having been revived from a prior life lead a 2nd life as end then sealed to live a 3rd life as dragon slayer

last chapter with the resort filler i wish it been a bit longer but i get why not but if they tole her from the room he was in how did he not wake up sensing something different

wow forced teleportation damn son

rekting fools after he rocked the tower and the slightest of background mentions of the other characters fights

so his end half helped him i guess its that instead of dragon force and he won and ate pure magic

the relationship can finally start yay

I loved the way you still added the 'you made Erza cry' and 'hurt her again and I'll kill you' part so beautiful:

its so cutee:3 update moreee3 plz:

so that happened erza was really cute then natsu rekt shit stopped a jupiter canon barehanded lost to his demon self who ily he got back in control because scarlet and they had a fuck everyone up and jose temporarily then erza helped him regain himself and they made a promise and had relationship bonding before master came and ended the war

well if you want to flesh it out have story i guess filler fluff then the tower then jellal

Well, it's nice to see Natsu bond with Gray some as he needed someone to keep him from doing something stupid or reckless.

Plus that bath scene of Natsu with Erza was pretty touching, nice job!

well i meant more on the way to the island random details while on the island etc but you know details on the way back and a nice little chapter guild bonding weird dreams (who has white hair that kill everyone was it a sprigan?) beside the point and nice naza bonding and a shower scene (where the fan service details on nudity lols mostly joking)

what's next? "Salamander of the Fairy Tail Family Book One Remastered Act One Section One Excerpt Thirty Three

Good thing Natsu kept his temper in check long enough to avoid hurting his friends, but the way he destroyed Deloria would've been bad ass to see. Even though iced Shell for all those years should've been enough to kill it anyway.

Finally Natsu and Erza have the talk about her behavior that they needed to get into. Making Erza see that Natsu isn't like Jellal, but now Natsu may have messed up in letting Ultear see him in that form. Either Jellal or worse, Grimore Heart will learn of Natsu's hidden form and power now. Taking down one of Zeref's demons with such ease isn't a small feat after all, especially when one person alone does it with such ease.

because he much stronger then canon and has been through a lot more and darker times his demon side was called out and came out sooner then normal (idk if this happened in the original version he did have a darker half but idk if that was his demon half) i do hop he still has all the cool flame types

well he just obliterated the demon of destruction and melted ur (whats gonna happen to her is she gone like canon) after punch ultears lights out and crushed lyons spirits he was misguided and all

it seem erza and him are now ok after he was gonna leave she muster the courage to tell him the truth

but you know bit rushed but its ok i think so since he tricked lullaby and torched it thus no damage no one was arrested as a scapegoat so i guess phantom lord is next but there been a lot of off screen stuff what happened between natsu setting sail and him crashing the mention of erza and him fighting what happened? or was that about her being mean and him getting upset and going it solo back at the guild