I adore your writing

Aww I think I died because this is too cute

Remus’s poem was truly terrible but it was so adorable and so was the rest

Oh, this is adorable! And Remus' poem is so stupid it's precious. :-P

AHH SO CUTE!

cute

Your Feedback/Grade for Assignment #1

Examiner: Screaming Faeries

Grade: 19/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback:

Characterisation was brilliant! You could see Sirius's quirky humour and flirty nature peeking through in his letters. This was such a cute and creative piece!

I loved the adorable little poems, and how Remus attempted to reprise some creative genius by writing his own poem at the end.

This was definitely an extremely original piece.

While it's all in letters, I think the pairing/character interaction was really clearly and cleverly displayed.

I think the story flowed really well. I like how you broke it up over a series of letters, and the informal nature of the story.

I removed one point for prompt because I didn't feel like you really captured a true 'moment of genius/clarity', but I can see where you have used it and how.

As you can probably imagine I enjoyed this immensely, and I think anyone who wouldn't must be mad!

No SPaG issues were detected! You were within the word count and the prompt was listed in your A/N, so you get the extra point.

so sweettttttt3

This was too cute. I love Sirius sending "secret admirer" notes and I LOVED his poem.

Remus' poem, omg. Sirius has this tattooed, of course.

Too cute!

Awwww

Awe

So. Adorable.

I love it so much I need much much much more of this one!

Awe! That was so sweet!

This story watered my crops and cleared my skin