Umm, ok... Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

Pray, Veger, Your? Kindly check spelling, it's a bit distracting. Though if the character is going to have a party of other persona users, it kind of ruins the fun for me... and I *hate* Greg in particular, so...

love to hear more ive always love the persona series and I been getting into the worm books

You know, for all the persona based fanfiction I have come across, I have yet to come across any dealing with Persona: Trinity Souls which seems like the most logical to use in Worm crossovers. At least its mechanics in regards to how it acts(the rest could easily go with the regular series of Persona). Though that may be my bias since it was the series that started me on the Persona series.

It could be better.

Honestly I've been into Worm for a while and just got into Persona recently but I love this concept.
Giving Palaces to evil Worm characters is something I haven't seen anywhere else on this site, but there are so many ways this works together. For example using PHO as the Phan-site or having Kaiser have a palace and having his son get a persona would be really cool. I'm following right now and can't wait to see more. Thanks for sharing this story!

I liked the chapter!1

Okay, I am a BIG fan of this idea. Considering how much darker Persona 5 was in tone than previous games, these two fit together really well. Keep up the good work, mate.

I wonder how the PRT will react when they steal her heart...

the emma chimera was creepy

well its not hard to be worse then Kamoshida in a world where have powers kinda normal

You just had to bring up little Nina, didn't you? You monster.

It’s great

Mind correcting your spelling?

I.E. 'Bizarre' instead of 'Bezar', 'Grimaced' instead of 'Grimoused'?

... so near the end you put he and his when its she and her