Reviews for Swirly |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2018 Oh, you missed a golden opportunity for Ezra to accuse Sabine of painting a picture of him. She wouldn't be able to prove she hadn't! I also feel like when Sabine said there are far better things for him to see, he could have said her in the shower. I think that would have been hilarious, and hopefully get a laugh out of Sabine. I like this story! I'd really like to see more stories of Ezra and Sabine. |
SweetSinger2010 chapter 1 . 1/24/2018 I really like these AU pieces you do. You hit just the right mix of somberness and humor, and this piece was no exception. I really feel for Sabine in this, trying to make sense of her grief for Kanan and Ezra through art. Kick in the feels, man. |
ruby throne chapter 1 . 1/21/2018 It was an excellent idea to express a feeling through color, and Sabine's unconscious decision "to remove some of the colors from her life; if Kanan couldn't have them, and Ezra, they felt meaningless sometimes" is one of the most heart-aching lines I have read, especially knowing who is saying it. |
springfieldbluebird chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 I really loved the bit about the way the painting symbolized Ezra’s descent into blindness. I thought the relationship between the two of them was oh, so sweet and perfect. Great job! |
InkSpatteredHands chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 Awww this was so cute! I love the way you described everything. You're awesome! |