i think it's like this the rinnesharingan looks like . /narutofanon/images/1/1d/Rinnegan_sharingan_by_ /revision/latest?cb20130821233830

Itachi is motivated, he just enjoys life outside of training as well

I say tsunade, Mei, Kurotsuchi, And Mikoto for Naruto’s other four. Part of me wants to say add Kushina too

Nice combat chapter, though now you’ve got to keep other fights to this same level at times

If Naruto lives with Kushina, why is he in an apartment?
Decent start, though my question is that if the three Uchiha are friends of his, why doesn’t Kushina just have Naruto stay with them when she’s outside the village to ensure he’s kept safe?

Naruto has done splendid. And he has two beautiful female friends that are lethal. Nice!

Naruto's RinneSharingan is a counter for all forms of Kekkai Genkai.

Okay!

Hmmm, not sure what I think of this yet. I'm completely behind the whole "it's fanfiction so we can do whatever we want with our fics." But my more calculative side can't help but point out exactly how unpolished the Rinne-sharingan you described is. A rinnegan with a sharingan for a pupil? Not sure how I feel about it. Is there any reason you didn't just go with a rinnegan with three tomoe spiralling in the innermost ring outside the "I can do what I want" reason?

Another thing, young Pakura and Konen, not sure how to critique those two. Part of me feels it has potential. But another part of me just doesn't like the fact you've muddled cannon by taking away the driving force of Nagato becoming what he did. But I'm not unreasonable, I'll wait and see what you plan on doing before I judge. The idea is a double edge sword, if you want the story to succeed you definitely need to find a way to compensate for the foreseeable loss of a major plot point.

Rinne-sharingan means shinju, shinju means 4th shinobi war, 4th shinobi war means tobi/Obito, obito means Madara, Madara means Conflict. I'm waiting to see how you reshape the story if you plan on moving away from canon. But if Akatsuki is still the big villains of the Narutoverse you should really find a way to reconstruct their origin story if Konan is being removed from that particular picture.

I would love for Tsunade especially to be in the harem (you considered her in the first chapter before updating it, if i am not mistaken?).. Then I also love Mei Terumi, Samui, Mikoto, Mabui and (if you accept incest) Kushina, also Kurenai and poor Yugao. I also really like Tsunami though with her not being a kunoichi it may be problematic. I will sooner or later write a Naruto Older Ladies Harem since I basically really like that kind of pairing :)

great story so far I hope Samui, Yugito, and Tayuya are in Naruto's harem if the final girls aren't already decided

Thx for the update

great Story
i love it
i would be cool if u could update soon

Good work, please update soon I want to see more please. All of my criticism is opinion based on this so I’ll leave it to myself. Keep up the good work though! All the best,

MM
Peace

i think you did a excelent job keep up the good work

please add mabui, samui, mei terumi, kin tsuchi, yugito, fu, ameyuri, ino, temari,