Reviews for The Little Girl and the Ottomans
Mariah chapter 15 . 8/22
sorry forgot will val use her powers to try and attack or at least defend herself from anything?
Mariah chapter 15 . 8/22
wow time for another fight and since val went alone now she has to listen to her own heart.

what bots are the ones that died?

are they cluster prime robots or cybertronian?
Mariah chapter 14 . 5/28
why did prevailing nightmare want with val i wonder?

or if it was someone else it wanted?
Mariah chapter 15 . 2/21
cool and thanks also did you know there is a transformers prime wii game i have seen it on youtube. I also think there is a nintendo switch version as well.
Mariah chapter 14 . 1/7
from my post yesterday if you still want to how about transformers animated seems a little cute yet strange but anyway in it and sorry for spoiler Elita one became techno organic spider and hates it so how about she meets val and she gets through to her and she uses her powers to cure Elita but allows her to keep the spider powers she has got from the transformation?
Mariah chapter 14 . 1/6
wow nice quick updating again?

also if you want to do another crossover with dolphinheart99 i would ask first of course but how about a transformers crossover?

Dolphinheart99 is already doing one but she's using transformers prime versions maybe you could do movie versions or transformers armada or transformers generation 1?
Mariah chapter 13 . 12/31/2019
wow haven't seen you for a while what will you do next?
Mariah chapter 12 . 10/3/2018
wow this is interesting what next?
Mariah chapter 11 . 8/3/2018
oh boy they are coming back.

what will happen next?
Mariah chapter 10 . 7/12/2018
wow they are back home.

also for them to meet can val be contacted by Crystalia and taught how to use the gate of beginning to open worlds and return?
Mariah chapter 9 . 6/27/2018
forgot did you see where dolphinheart99 has a story up for adoption i left it in your other little girl story?

the continent story.
Mariah chapter 9 . 6/27/2018
wow so that is the gate of beginning can you make sure dolphinheart99 sees it or gets an idea from it to use on her predacon rewrite story?

also Darumai is dead but val couldn't heal him oh no can he be revived?
Mariah chapter 8 . 6/6/2018
oh good lord this battle is bad what will happen?

will val unleash all her powers and throw the invaders away?
Mariah chapter 7 . 4/8/2018
wow Sumer was XJ-9 or Jenny wow.

will they try to take Val?
Gabriel chapter 6 . 3/26/2018
Hey Sporedude15, I had this crazy idea of a crossover, but instead have just the characters Val, Quinn, Jay, Mike, Alex and Sofia. This is an alternate dimension where Val is not half galatria and her friends are just regular people and here's how the story works out its like a crossover with the relic movie with dino squad, 2001 evolution movie and miraculous ladybug. A strange glowing meteorite crash lands in Colorado where inside of it are strange looking microbes that contain DNA of every animal on Earth that anything or anyone where to become infected, could cause them to mutate into hybrid monsters and it was found by a evil corporation named Troxcorp where James Troxster plans to use the microbes for world domination as he starts by contaminating Claytor lake in Roanoke VA and that is where they are at and how they get infected is while they were swimming in the lake, they didn't know that the microbes were in the water as it starts to infect them but to a sudden miracle and surprise, the microbes don't cause any uncontrollable mutation instead it allows them to control their powers and allow them to transform into hybrid creatures except Val but her abilities can remove the microbes from anyone or anything infected with them and her hair changes from brown to snow color white and during the season 1 finale, she does transform into an Indominus Rex like creature when she is angered by Troxster who hurts her parents which causes her transformation.
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