Great story don't stop (more chapters please)

I like the story even tho the pace is really slow. It's been nine chapters and all that has happened is MC being born - MC getting to know his mom and dad - MC learning about his bloodline but can't do anything with it yet because he needs to practice chakra exercises more - MC visiting Konoha and meeting the cast(Kakashi, Kurenai, Asuma, etc) and now MC is going back to the village. There are lots and lots of dialogues between people. And there isn't much personal character development because the MC is still too young to go and train etc I guess.

It's a slow one but good if you look past all the misspellings. I think I'll return to this Fanfic once there are a lot more chapters to read in one go. I would continue reading to the latest chapter(14) but I've found something else that seemed more fun to read.

Thanks for the chapters!

Found some mistakes.

This is how you wrote the sentence:
"did i die, am i in heaven, am i being held by some giant angel?"

This is how I would have written it(Grammarly):
"Did I die? Am I in heaven? Am I being held by some giant angel ?"

A sentence or two later you start spelling the word Angel wrong for some reason. If you had Grammarly it would have highlighted the words that you misspelled.

Angel:
one of a class of spiritual beings; a celestial attendant of God. In medieval angelology, angels constituted the lowest of the nine celestial orders (seraphim, cherubim, thrones, dominations or dominions, virtues, powers, principalities, or princedoms, archangels, and angels).
conventional representation of such a being, in human form, with wings, usually in white robes.

Angle:
Geometry.
The space within two lines or three or more planes diverging from a common point, or within two planes diverging from a common line.

"The man spoke in his foreign tongue again and guided the applesauce into my mouth, I don't like being fed* but my sense of my arms are about as useful as a sprinkler in a rainstorm so I let the man feed me."

*Fed
verb
simple past tense and past participle of feed.

I've also seen others comment about recommending you get a beta reader. Which would help you for sure... or you could download Grammarly.

Grammarly is free.
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Brilliant, cool intro so far.

Man, i'm so curious to know the direction of this story. Thanks for updating. Take care and stay safe bro!

Thank you very much for the update :)

No, please! Akatsuki are a very particular brand of crazy, their plan is terrible. I hope that Isamu, as a SI will know that supporting them makes no sense.

As for backstory of his clan - I loved it. I can see how Akimichi or Hoshigaki with their partial shifting could be a watered down version of this bloodline. Also you answered quite well the question, why would Isamu's father be so averse to Konoha - seeing that Uzumaki slaughtered the main gathering of his clan and that Uchicha had their hand in this genocide. Though - am I naive hoping that some cooperation with Leaf is still possible?

Corona-chan is ruthless

can't wait for the next chapter.

It should change the canon - Guren was quite a strong underling of Orochimaru.

As to your story - I quite liked it. To be completely honest - I saw it many times in people's favourite's, but I was discouraged by the description - "born to freedom, living under dictator". I was afraid of Social Justice Warrior rants. Aside from MC's father, there was not much of it, so I was glad.

The thing that I liked the most is the suggestion that they can't die from old age - a logical application of a true shapeshifting. The friendship with Kakuzu was surprising, but somehow right.

I am sligthly disappointed in demonising Konoha - people from the village seemed friendly, there was no hint of hunting MC's family. Maybe it is their paranoia born from age of Warring Clans (they should remember it)?

shit

Spelling errors my guy, best one "rain of shrunken"

When is next chapter I really like story

This be on 4th of July Brother.

cool chapter bro i got a question tho can the si. transform into fictional characters like ben 10 aliens or saiyans or kriptonion