| Reviews for Strawberry & Bee |
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   erasenpai946 chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 Interesting story please do not stop. |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 11/20/2018 A pretty good story, but also fast paced. My advice is to give it more description and maybe make it more...longer in word length? But still has potential! |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 Great start to this! What’ve you got planned I wonder? |
| Ordinarymonkey123 chapter 4 . 11/2/2018 You have saved yourself... for now |
| Hallow chapter 4 . 11/1/2018 First off, interesting to see you take up my advice about describing characters' appearances. As for THIS chapter... Oh my, I guess you're departing from canon quite a bit then? Well then let us see where this story goes. Good luck! |
| Fractoluminescence chapter 4 . 11/1/2018 OMG O_O Nice plot! |
| Fractoluminescence chapter 3 . 2/12/2018 HAahahahaha I'm not gonna drop the readign ;D |
| Hallow chapter 2 . 2/6/2018 This is a VERY interesting prompt, made more so by having Ichigo unlock his hollow powers on his own and not just have him be given temporary shinigami powers like he did from Rukia only with Soifon (easier for me to type) in her place. It also makes me wonder who the captain and lieutenant of the 2nd are now? Also I would endeavor to describe characters' appearances in more detail. Like how does Soifon's look compare to canon? Does she still have long braids? I don't know how you plan to carry out this story compared to canon, but if you do (though this would require Soifon having the Hougyoku planted inside her and her being taken prisoner) could you have Tatsuki develop powers in addition to Orihime and Chad? It is a shame that executives forced Kubo to abandon his original plans for her. I bet she would get along well with Soifon and Yoruichi. Good luck with this story! |
| Fractoluminescence chapter 2 . 2/5/2018 correction: "didn't know you THOUGHT of him that heavily" (please tell me if this correction thing is annoying) All characters are IC and story everything but boring. Awaiting the next chapter :D |
| Windying chapter 2 . 2/5/2018 Well, this is interesting at the very least. |
| seshomeru chapter 2 . 2/5/2018 isn't she Soi Fon though |
| Ordinarymonkey123 chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 If you don’t make more you will leave me no choice but to destroy you :/ so make more |
| Fractoluminescence chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 correction : "AND hid his mother's cross" Very good beginning, you made it both similar and special, following :D |
| Primera Luz chapter 1 . 2/3/2018 Good start, maybe flush out the details a bit more. Other than that, I look forward to reading more. |
| Ichigo Oga chapter 1 . 2/3/2018 better release new chapters fast |
