Reviews for Harry the Exalted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting Dark Harry story and not too long too Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story it was fun dark Harry is always fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write a sequel to this story. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Other than me not knowing the word sycophant and the science about supercharging sperm (which doesn't make any sense to me, perhaps it's not a widely used term) to increase fertility rate among purebloods, this had a good start, very original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your Harry is the most ridiculously stupid Harry ever. Serving the murderer of his parents, because an old coot sent him to the Dursleys. Your Harry is deranged. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't REALLY see how this classifies as "evil" DUMBledore screwed him over and he joined Voldermort to get his parents back but then he created a serum to SAVE his people then he took over the world to SAVE it from destruction and even when he killed Voldermort it was only in self-defense, and THIS last part where he actually pities the guy supposed to kill him just shows a human side that shows he wasn't good or evil he was just a damaged man who wanted to be loved and have a family and who did what he had to do to get it, SURE killing the Dursley's COULD be seen as "evil" but REALLY? are we trying to say they SHOULDN'T die? but yeah overall good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() very well written great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing Dark Harry story, maybe the best I've ever read. What made it the most believable was that he was still similar to canon Harry- his love for Hermione & the Weasleys, his disgust with the Malfoys- those things make this feel like he's still Harry instead of basically being an OC named Harry Potter. Brilliant work. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok this story had a god story however the last half has Pacing issues. You can tell sides story’s that only Advance the stieybs little turn go to fully advancing the plot with out them. It feels Unsatisfying because you skipped all that time. It also felt like you were just done with the story. Good overall plot just done bad decisions at the end thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell ehyndid yiu speed it up it had great pacing but not now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this is a really really good start to this. Keep going with this I want to know where it goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good story. I wish there was more of it. |