this is fuckin great please update !

Definitely want more of this

Sup man it's been a few months since the last update, is this story still going or has it been abandoned? This is one of my favorite crossover stories, it'd be a shame to see such a well written one die out only 13 chapters in.

Aw man, I'm all caught up now... Phooey (･ε･)... This sure is an entertaining story, though! I think what enjoy the most about this is probably the pacing. I mean, you're 100k words into this story and we have yet to reach the ending of Vol 1. Which is pretty great since it gives us more opportunities for relationship growth and spidey crime fighting action! Though, I do feel like there should be a bit more interactions between the characters in school. Maybe some more personal conversations between Peter and other characters? Conversations similar to Peter and Weiss' heart to heart during the first chapters, for some more character growth. Don't get me wrong, I really enjoy all the action scenes, but I feel like some personal downtime with the teams would change up the story and maybe even cause some major changes to the overarching canon plot of RWBY. I mean, this IS a crossover with a really active character, so butterfly effects are bound to happen. But yeah man, other than that, you're doing a really great job with this story!

Also, I know this isn't really relevant, but I just can't help but imagine a younger PS4 Peter Parker for this rendition. He's just the perfect one in my opinion, and he has a voice that's not difficult at all to imagine speaking through your lines :). Hell, he already has a young adult sound to him, so just some simple copy paste in my mind and voila! But speaking of Spiderman PS4. I don't know if you've played it yet, but some of the gadgets used in that game are pretty damn unique. And I was thinking that maybe you can incorporate some of those into this story? Take the Suspension Matrix, for example. Just add a touch of gravity dust to the idea, and boom, remnants very own suspension matrix! Just a little idea I had since you're having Peter make weapons for his huntsman side.

Again, fantastic job on the story :)! I know shit's been pretty rough as of late with this bum ass year, but I hope it hasn't deterred you from continuing this. I ain't got nothing much left to say other than this: stay safe out there, wash your hands, and if possible, stay the fuck at home :D! Take care and until next time, my good author!

If Pete's gonna get a shield, then he HAS to base it off Cap's! I mean, with the way he was just throwing it around and bashing into the Wendigo with it, it would just be too much of a missed opportunity! It doesn't even have to have the same colors, but at least put the star in the middle and have it be circular :D!

Damn. Even the Jersey Devil from The Wolf Among Us is in here lmao.

Even though I'm halfway through the story, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that Peter still won't have his aura unlocked by chapter 13. Not to say that I don't want him to have aura, but it seems like you're really apprehensive when it comes to him having it. That said, I can still see him unlocking it before the story reaches endgame(lol). If only just to help against the fight with Salem and her goons.

Man this story is good! I hope you come back to write more!

Well would you look at this! I like the story quite a bit and would love to see more of it. Please update it? If for nothing else than to let us know its not abandoned? If not Thanks for sharing anyway.

It’s been five months, are you alive?

this good I hope you update one day.

Well, I mean, the White Fang DO have a point. Humans had been ruthlessly discriminating and committing violence against them for centuries. You can't blame people like Adam for fighting back when they get their faces branded like animals and tortured for their very existence. Blake even said that the White Fang were getting results and that the Faunus were starting to be treated as equals for their actions.

It seems kinda strange for Peter to be so judgmental about a group he knows very little about. Not to mention the fact that someone saying "the good ones" like he did is an actual example of racism that's seen in real life. It makes him seem like someone that's just subtly racist against the Faunus when he should be, in character, actively advocating for Faunus rights. After all, he works with the freaking X-Men all the time and considers them close friends.

He wouldn't be ignoring the discrimination and hatred against Faunus just because there's a violent organization fighting for them. That'd be like him letting the human purists of marvel attack mutants just because of Magneto using violence for mutant rights. He obviously wouldn't side with Adam or Magneto and would fight them, but he ESPECIALLY wouldn't act so callous towards Faunus and mutants like you wrote him as.

I don't think that this is intentional, but this is extremely out of character for him, and I sincerely hope that you work to fix this in later chapters.

Neo is probably the only one you could call SuperVillain while Junior and his lackeys probably around Tombstone level I guess tough but not that dangerous like Electro or Sandman

Somehow you got me to approve that he gone to Beacon. Not just I should go there because that's where the main characters at so I gotta go there

Gotta say that was impressive take on Spider-Man for a xover fic. Usually they just put him as Naive New Hero in the Block