| Reviews for The Black Arrow |
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   Kysor Shades chapter 36 . 7/23 update, more, u doin real good |
| Snipern0sniping chapter 36 . 7/10 Question? Why doesn't Nate just tell slade shado is alive? It'd at least throw him off his game with how messed up his head is, if not make slade focus on the league to verify. |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 31 . 7/1 This entire chapter was basically a wankfest of you complaining about all you felt was wrong about cannon Arrow ... |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 27 . 7/1 You're contantly writing Naruto instead of Nathan. Also you're sometimes still referring to Lyla as a he/him. |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 14 . 7/1 You even here called Felicity just 'a deviant hacktivist' and yet you had him literally detonate her body into seperate pieces. That just shows how weird and OOC and over the top her murder was, regardless of how much you hate Felicity as a ship for the MC. This is Fanfic AU you know, you can totally change her nature into one that's not one you hate ... |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 13 . 7/1 You're way too extreme in your hatred for Felicity, so much so it made your character act massive OOC by killing her that violently. Kind of a let down tbh. |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 12 . 7/1 No Thea in harem? I knew you were an uncultured bastard but for it to be this bad, tsk tsk |
| AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 1 . 6/30 If he doesn't even have recollection of his old life, what's the point of saying he was reincarnated from Naruto then. Or the crossover tag? |
| Hmason chapter 35 . 6/15 after Slade and the League it just went downhill |
| Ieuan Evans 2814 chapter 35 . 5/29 And I think you should add samantha arias since she is basically the mother of your child so you might as well add her in so she can have some fun like the rest of the girls and I give nate time to bond with ruby |
| tiger9868 chapter 36 . 5/27 please update |
| MYRAIZUMA chapter 36 . 5/26 Great story hope you add thea you know what they say incest is wincest hahahahaha |
| Inu-Shinta chapter 36 . 5/14 I hope you base Harley on the recent animated show in terms of both attitude and appearance. I also wanted to do an unofficial vote for Poison Ivy( Assault or Hush movie), and Caitlin/Killer Frost. It amazes me how much easier/simpler everything is for Nate with the right people around him. Granted him having a better version of Mirakuru helps as well, but just listening to Lyla and Chien got Helena to stay with him. Of course there are other examples as well. |
| thekingmaker199 chapter 36 . 5/7 Good story, hope you update dawn breaks over Westeros soon |
| Chp289 chapter 36 . 5/4 thea in the harem please |
