"He felt bad for deceiving his parents"...what? Try to stick to one personality; either he resents them and wouldn't feel bad at all about a simple lie or he loves them and still just wants to be a bitch and accepted by them.

What the FUCK does ten ten know about Chinese food

So is this abandoned?

Please update

Nice story

Amazing first chapter! Can't wait to see more :)

All light dies

Plzzzzzzzz. Update

if you would like me to help with the spelling ask me in a PM BUT you misspelled INCARCERATION

Wow I really enjoyed the story till it began naruto sharingun fic never really cared for the magic copy and use it just as well, kind of defeated the whole hard work theory , naruto started with. I wouldn't worry to much about it most everyone else has forgotten that to.

is this still a ongoing story

Man! Loved your story. Can u post the chapters a bit regular? Its exciting.

If this gets any more edgy I might accidentally cut myself reading this

The fucks even going on in this story? I cant identify the timeline of it at all, at one point he is 10/11 in mist village, but then kushina says hes 14 in the midst of all this and then theres the sht with hagoromo and time travel

A Really Good Story...Its really a piece of fine literature for me. Just ignore those Manga and Anime freaks, If they want something canon tell them to see the anime or read the manga...Idiots Really. But to me its a really Gripping Story that makes you wonder what will happen next. And the part by part flashbacks of Naruto was brilliant move