Reviews for Inner Power
Guest chapter 11 . 6/30
You called it Deliora a few times.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30
I can't stand Lucy! Or Erza either for that matter so domineering...
Vincent balmes chapter 17 . 5/23
Hey bro hope you got my message from april 17 since i hope you can give me an answer for it on what do you think I have said to you anyways i'll see the next chapter of fairy tail natsu of the darkness man
Bachi the cat chapter 4 . 5/22
Lisanna died.

p.s accidently posted before I was finished writing.
Bachi the cat chapter 4 . 5/22
I don't think Mirajane had much breast soon after Lisann
Imperial-samaB chapter 17 . 5/22
Nice job. Let's see what is next
altajir95 chapter 17 . 5/22
Totally nice chapter. Looking forward to more. :))
Legalt chapter 2 . 3/14
Ugh, another person who thinks mass harems in a novel with a plot is a good idea... It ONLY works in smut fics.

Like seriously, just make up your mind with the pairings. If you're doing harem, pick the top like 4 or 5 women YOU want, not what the randoms want, else you might as well just add every female.

But whatever, sad that I have to drop this... I expected just Mira and Erza and a FEW more, but so many just ruins it. You can't write a good story with good romance and character development when the harem is big. Just isn't possible. Easily turns something that could be great into something mediocre...

Still, you don't write too bad. I would stop using "shall" so much, though. It just doesn't fit. Like, imagine Natsu's voice saying "shall". Or Mira in her voice. Really imagine it. Doesn't fit, right? Anyway, good luck to you.
Vincent balmes chapter 16 . 3/8
I hope the next chapter natsu gets the pills from mystogan first before he goes to edolas and i hope carla isn't harsh on happy you know but i wonder if natsu can learn twilight:dark evolution and tartaros drive as a dragon slayer amplification magic you know and the i hope to see that soon enough
NinjaFang1331 chapter 16 . 3/8
Excellent job
Imperial-samaB chapter 16 . 3/8
Very nice. I can't wait
altajir95 chapter 16 . 3/8
Awesome chapter as always. That Nadia woman is sure very amusing. And very interesting mercenary group, looking forward to see more actions. XD
Vincent balmes chapter 15 . 12/16/2019
Then please update the next chapter of natsu of the darkness this december man i'm begging you bro please i promise i'll give you some good ideas which is natsu's power of course i swear
NinjaFang1331 chapter 15 . 12/16/2019
Excellent update
Imperial-samaB chapter 15 . 12/16/2019
Nice work
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