Reviews for If I Should Fall
Phantom Actress chapter 16 . 1/16/2019
Everything AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH said!

Except I don't swear.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2018
Eli this is not good! This freaking author is trying to ruin The Greatest Showman! Why would you do such a thing! Charity would never leave P.T.! Nobody was gay then! It wasn't a thing until after WW2! You just ruined this story!l! Why!
Eli chapter 16 . 11/16/2018
This is like, the best fanfiction I have ever read in a while and I usually don't like to read a fanfic where there's an oc but I don't mind BUT THIS, THIS IS JUST GREAT, I LOVE YOUR OC, EMA IS WONDERFUL, the kiss she had with charity just made everything incredibly suspenseful, with the court between the circus and the board of trade coming up and then this OUT OF NO WHERE KISS? GOOD PLOT BBY, I really enjoyed this chapter and hoped for more soon! You're an incredible writer, this is really good, oh my goodness this is so good, AND THEN WITH EMA AND LETTIE TOO OH MY GODDDD THIS IS JUST A BEAUTIFUL FANFICTION, I LOVE IT, YOU'RE AMAZING
Eli chapter 16 . 11/16/2018
Damn, damn damn damnn, I'm so shook, oh my goodness, wow.
Dark Calamity of Princess chapter 16 . 10/21/2018
This is a master piece
Everything is just so accurate and perfect. I love your writing, I love how you portray the character. Usually, I hate OC but gosh, I love Ema too!
I will wait for your update, take your time
upwiththebirds33 chapter 16 . 10/3/2018
WHY? CHARITY IS NOT LESBIAN AND SHE WOULD NOT ABANDON P.T.
Please don't take this as me being against LGBTQ people, I'm not at all, but Charity isn't lesbian.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/26/2018
Aggggggggggghhhhhhhhh, I agree with you! I mean you did cuss a lot, but I get you.
AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH chapter 16 . 9/12/2018
1. *inhale* AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
NO. JUST FUCKING NO. CHARITY IS NOT FUCKING GAY.

*exhale* basically, I absolutely love this story. But Ema and this budding relationship is not going to work. I'm just going to pretend that this stupid shitty kiss doesn't exist.

2. Charity isn't lesbian, she shouldn't enjoy it. She's forever loyal to Barnum, she would never enjoy a lesbian kiss.
This was a really good story, but the most recent chapter was terrible.

3. EMA IS THE FUCKING WORST! I hated her character, I hated that she basically replaced Barnum, I hated how she was so feminist, and I hated the most that she had the FUCKING BALLS to even TOUCH Charity. NOPE! YOUR OC IS FUCKING BULLSHIT. I hate it, and I wish she never existed.

I'm forgetting that I ever read this, I'm glad you stopped writing.

From,
Someone Who Fucking Despises You.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2018
Guest apparently named Emma, thank you!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2018
I sort of hated Ems but I accepted her. But this was too far. CHARITY is NOT gay.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2018
M-j98 that kiss was not cute.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2018
Why would you ruin this perfectly good story with that kiss. CHARITY IS NOT GAY! Please fix it.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2018
Charity is NOT gay! It offends me that you write that. Again Charity is NOT gay!
WolvieLover chapter 16 . 8/25/2018
This is an amazing story and I hope you update soon because there isn’t enough stories about P.T and Charity. Favorite story!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/22/2018
Keep writing! This story has me so intrigued I read it all in one night! I swam a know what happens and if she tells Phinn or not about the kiss! You are an amazing and very detailed writer and you are doing an incredible job with this story so far! Please don’t stop it here!
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