Seems that the traveler has fallen for the SMT staple, the pit trap. All joking aside I'm interested in seeing how this story will play out, I don't think anyone's written a story about a post-apocalyptic Gameindustri, I just hope she doesn't go for a conquest run.

Update!

Interesting concept

So nice story and all but there is a doubt in my mind. Will the CPUs of Hyperdimension appear in you story in the future?

Now my expectations are high since you revealed the fact it's a brother-sister bonding. This is original, and I like. Show me something amazing.
PS: the woman who has left Nepgear... Was it Arfoire?

Dude. This is amazing so far. Nice.

Must have more. Can’t wait for the the updates.

Dang it, when you finally think you found a wincest fic but isn’t meant to be. ;-;
(Just do it)

now this is what i call quality content. Good chapter and an original idea, bravo (clapping emoji,clapping emoji,clapping emoji,clapping emoji,)

my sentiments regarding this basically echo draen's, this has the potential to be a good story

This has loads of potential, and this may be massive!

Instafollowed!

At first I thought it was a OC x Nepgear (there are so many of them) but this one was different. I mean, an OC that raise a child Nepgear? That's different. Perphas even the first one. There a bit of grammatical mistake (heck you even wrote Neogear at the end of the chapter lol). I'll follow this story, hoping it will stray from the usual common stories.

You have me hooked, you have me hooked, can’t wait for more.

Sounds like an interesting premise. I'll read it as soon as I get the chance