Great story, I can’t wait to see what you write next.

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Aww, I absolutely love this next chapter! There are so many parts of this story that I absolutely loved! There's a lot of love and emotions in here. Ace is such a sweetheart making those chocolates for all of his friends (and his love). I find it so endearing how Ace's mom and grandma are both aware of Ace having these feelings. It can't be helped. Ace has such an earnest heart. He really wears his emotions on his sleeves and he loves with all of his heart. It's so sweet he made chocolate. Even if it's (in Japan) traditional for just girls to make, I think it's extra sweet Ace went the extra mile and went to make something for all his precious friends.

I really loved Tamazo too. I think it's precious he wanted to make things up to Ace. I think you wrote Haru well. Poor Ace there will always be the Lance fans (but he can take pride in knowing Lance will accept his gift and not the fans) Also loved the little cafe scene. Garnet is always amusing and I love the way you wrote her. Yes, Garnet Ace doesn't like Lance...he loves Lance. Love that little correction she made; it was just so Garnet and perfectly snarky. Charo is a sweetheart for recognizing Ace's feelings for Lance. Tiger was typical Tiger.

There's a lot of great buildups that led to Lance, and it worked wonderfully. It definitely felt like Ana when I was reading that. I can't blame her for wanting to tell the person she 'loves' her feelings, but ouch saying that to Ace. I laughed when Ace tried to guess if it was Tiger or Charo she liked instead. Well, Ace you can take pride in the fact Lance only has eyes for you.

Lance and Devi were as precious as usual. I loved how Tamazo blurted out that Ace made chocolate for Lance. That was precious. Lance would definitely be amused by that. Ace is way too cute turning pink after hearing that. It's sweet how Devi looked after Tamazo at Lance's request. It certainly has been some time since they last saw each other. I absolutely adored how Ace reminisced on that night and 'the morning after.' I love how Lance mentioned that; Ace would definitely get so flustered hearing that. Waking up in the arms, of the person you love the most would be flustering. It's too bad Ace didn't stay longer but it's understandable.

I found it super sweet that Ace spent extra time making Lance's chocolate. It seemed like he decorated it so sweetly. Definitely Love Dark Chocolate and Lance seems like the type of character that would like the bittersweet taste. Of course, Lance's ego would be fueled by how flustered Ace gets around him. Lance's little plan to get Ace to 'taste' the chocolate was wonderful. He ended up helping Ace confess (and/or stealing Ace's chance of confessing first haha). That was a really nice and passionate kiss. Ace is so adorable, getting weak in the knees after that kiss. It can't be helped, being kissed so passionately by the person you love so much (and for so long) would do that to ya. It's precious how Ace kinda collapsed into Lance's arms. Oh, Lance thought he overdid it with that kiss. Well, these two may just need to practice more so Ace can eventually get his revenge on Lance making him all weak and flustered. I really adored how Lance held/carried Ace like that. It would be sweet if that happens in the future. I know Ace finds it embarrassing but I think deep down he likes being so to Lance like that.

Oh Ana, it seems Lance will have to make things clear another time.

The ending was sweet~ Tamazo and Devi worked on that cake, how precious. Love how Angine saw Lance with Ace in his arms. That's so cute. I also really love all their little squabbles throughout. Aww, and Lance not wanting to put Ace down was precious~! It seems like these two have a happy ending. They'll remember this Valentine's Day always.

Excellent story!