Very cool! I love how Dean can get along with the natives and doesn't resist saving people even in the virtual environment!

Great way to get an evaluation without the problems from an actual mission

What a fun addition to this 'verse!
I'm still looking forward to a sequel featuring Dean on the Planet of the Kids, as you hinted at in the epilogue of the previous story. I think that has the potential to be a great story. I like the way you're slowly revealing details of Dean's past to the Atlantis personnel, so seeing Dean being so good with kids, and learning how he practically raised his brother, would be another interesting revelation.
I hope you will take it as a compliment when I say that I have noticed great improvement in your writing style since you began the first story of this series. Your stories have begun to flow much better and have a good rhythm, and a good balance of action with character development. So, as I said, I'm really looking forward to reading what you decide to do next with this 'verse.
Thank you for writing!

Omg yay! I was so happy when I saw this story was up! But I made myself a deal not to read until I'd gotten things done on my to-do list today. Lol. I love this 'verse! And once again, awesome story. :) It made me wanna play video games. Haha. But seriously, nice little addition to this series. I liked that it was Ronon and Dean fighting together. And Sheppard and Lorne supervising (I agree with Dean, a grinning Sheppard woulda made me nervous too lol). Zelenka was funny when he was scolding Sheppard. Anyway, good job! Looking forward to what comes next!

Love this series. Happy to see it continued.