Well.. Its well written but it's somewhat unsatisfying imo. He trained three years and apparently now have them in overpower state YET that overpower state is barely showcased whether in rocket hideout raids and training. Heck, even that fight with steven is only with ash newer Pokemon. All fight scenes are mostl5th ash doing his aura stuff.

Also, we haven't even seen ash's shaven face. Blue glowing eyes is cool and all but i rather see ash new look instead of a bearded caveman.

Aura Guardian sex life is pretty redundant too. It's as if it's only added for lame laughs and a bit lime instead of lemons. I really rather see ash and cynthia fluff, cuddle and stuff instead of reading them talking and doing softcore shits. Maybe make into more love inclined than lust driven cause they aren't even doing anything downright lemon'y at all.

Anyways... It's a good read. And hope sequel could have more pokemon action (that aren't just mention and summarized) and ashxcynthia fluffs, cuddles and just some romance that isn't about them talking sexual and what to do at the bed later.

Cutting his hand is so fucking damn unnecessary. He's already been tortured to the point that his mind is barely in it and his body is probably already ridden with scars so what's the fucking point of cutting his hand!?

1st. He sacrificed three years of his life bing a hermit in a cave and the result he got is torture and losing a hand.
2nd. He was surrounded by a small army of legendary level pokemon and has full level aura manipulation that could practically scan the surrounding and the result he got is getting fucking caught off guard and kidnapped under everyones nose. Wtf is that!?

It's as if all his effort are all for not! He trained in seclusion cause of arceus and when he return all he saw was corpses he wasn't able to save and a traumatized lady cause apparently his training is not enough!? So why did arcues not kidnapped him earlier then!?

That is what i dislike about pokemon fics rated M. I get that they wanna show that pokemon isn't all sunshine and game BUT is it necessary to Overdo it!? Authors keep overdoing stuff and keep forgetting that the mc they are fucking make live a miserable life and sacrifice a lot of thing is but a KID barely a TEENAGER!

Chosen one my ass! He sacrificed a lot even when he's been trained to handle such stuff only to be rewarded by one pussy and a missing hand! Totally not worth it imo... C1-17/29 and all he did was to sacrifice himself.

I refuse to believe that this fics world doesn't have any kind people stronger than him(ash) so i believe this 16 year old kid doesn't necessarily have to get all the hurt and scar. And now a missing hand.

So we have an SI in Ash or something? Because Ash would never give up this easily that's not his style.

Will Ash get shaved?!

More chapters plz

Hey Plz continue this story ...it's good...I need more chapters

will there be a sequel?
like everyone's reaction when it is revealed that ash is red

I thought it was great but it does need a sequel for the tournament

Hey!

I typically avoid writing reviews for completed works as I believe that the conclusion of said work is enough catharsis for the writer. Yet, as I read through this entire story, I can't help but heap praises upon praises for this splendid story. You had me hooked and glued to my screen from start to finish. Your rendition of Ash is one of my personal favorites on this platform, as is your characterization of Cynthia. Rayshippping has always been one of the three ships I favor the most, and this story did it justice and so much more.

Honestly, the only thing I could nitpick from this story is your grammar, but even that is not irredeemably bad. From the starting battles, training dialogues, emotional and gut-wrenching moments, and the sweet taste of victory, this work has truly been a euphoric experience. Even with your admittance to the quality "dropping," I honestly do not even notice it. Your writing is impeccable, and the manner in which you structure your stories is top-notch. There were times that I squealed in delight, where my heart panged, and my excitement tore down the roof of my room.

I understand that you may not be as motivated to write the sequel to this story, but I genuinely hope you do pick it up one day. I don't even expect much to happen from a narrative standpoint. The sequel really should just pivot around Pokemon battles, as well as Ash and Cynthia's relationship, including the more steamy moments. I hope that you realize how amazing your story is and that I, along with so many other readers, would be ecstatic to see the sequel. Until then, I will be patiently waiting for that faithful day.

Again, thank you for such a wonderful story, and I can only wish you the best from here on out. I pray that your love for writing this comes back because God knows I would be overcome with joy when I see your passion return for this project.

Much love from the PH!

hello writer i liked this one and i hope you continue it when you finally feel like~ honestly im rly lookin forward to next chapter,

hey this was great! now just to hope you continue ~

can get ash to shave?

Will you write a sequel

So him losing his hand ruined this whole fucking thing. Why? What was the fucking point? Are you kidding? You did it for fucking shock factor, and that's so pointless.

So a 13 year old Ash just picked up a 130 lb Aron just like that?