It's really interesting so far. I like how they all are just gradually figuring out what Ratchet has gone through, him included. I'm just imagining ratchet casually building a ship in the garage if they leave him alone, and all the stuff they'll find out if they just leave him alone anywhere at all.

If possible
I'd like to see Ratchet spar with Azimuth, and as it goes on he'll have flashes of what he went through, his actual fight with the General, and he'll just breakdown infront of him. Would make some nice drama and some reveal. Hehe

Hey Tea, it’s all good take the time you need. As someone who also works multiple jobs I know wearing so many hats can really wear a person down. Just do what you can for now. Also that story idea about ratchets journal from his time separated from clank also sounds like a really good idea that you should pursue once things calm down on your end.

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ya, that chapter was a bit clumsy, but it made progress on Ratchet, got to see more from your OCs and now Clank is up to something mysterious.

I guess all that megacorp commando training pays off. Also his time in the rangers and all of his solo adventures

i really like this chapter! we get to see more of clank and more of you OCs.

Oh wow... this is a lot better than what you give yourself credit for. There are a lot of things in here that have been improved from the previous chapters, and it made it such a joy to read!

Haha! Ratchet has finally woken up, and now our story really gets going! It was thrilling to read his portion in this chapter, and (I guess I say this about every chapter, but it's something you do a very good job on) the character interactions were nice to read. Now that Ratchet's awake and able to stand, and that the other characters have finally met him, I can't wait to see how things go after this!

And we got the introduction of what might be our villain of the story! I liked the presentation of this character, and with the villain's (or the Council's) rules set in place, I'm beyond curious to see how this impacts Ratchet, Kaden, and Alister in the future. It gives a good setup for a big climax later on, and you did a fantastic job writing it! But for the next few chapters, I'm sure we'll get to see some good old bonding between the characters and some possible world-building.

Alright, I'm all caught up now, and I must say, this fic has a whole lot of potential in it. It's thrilling to read, has a fun concept that it can dive into, and has a nice plot to it that I would love to see your take of. I'm interested to see what will come next, and I like what I've seen so far. :) Definitely faving this story, and I wish you luck with writing for future chapters!

Great job on this chapter! Keep up the awesome work! :)

OOooooohhhh, this is getting good!

More interesting developments have popped up, and I'm really liking what I see so far! There's more great character interactions continuing on from the last chapter, and my my... I'm just going to say that I love the end of the chapter.

Ah, now the story's really starting to pick up. Things are about to start coming together, and then we'll finally get into the main story! I'm really excited, and I wonder how Ratchet's going to take things once he wakes up and finds out where he is. And, well, I'm also curious as to how the Lombaxes around him with help him feel "at home." It can also give a chance to give some world-building to the world Ratchet's now in, and if you haven't put in a bit of world-building in later chapters already, then that may be something that you could do. :)

I really like the ending to this chapter. I really like seeing the flip-side of Ratchet finding Clank. Not only does it give the little robot his own little journey to go on when it comes to finding his friend, but it also has him go through the same challenges and pain Ratchet might have felt during his time alone, and I very much like equal treatment when it comes to certain characters. I like seeing this side of Clank, and I'm eager to see more of it in the future!

Ah, and the final lines... A nice cliffhanger to end off on, and one that has me typing this review out a little quicker so I can find out what happens next! I believe there's one more chapter before I'm all caught up, so I shall end this review off here and hop onto the next chapter. :D

Nice job on this chapter! Keep up the excellent work! :)

Alright, onto the second chapter! (This... took longer than I expected...)

Things have started to get going, and I really enjoyed reading this chapter! Not only do we get to see a lot of other Lombax characters before we get to the main story (of course hinted at in the summary), but we also get a whole load of action in this. There's a lot that goes on, and it's definitely a thrilling chapter to read to say the least. :D

I'll dwell a bit on the characters before I talk about the awesome action. I love seeing your portrayal of the characters we already know- Azimuth and Kaden. We haven't really gotten to Ratchet yet, but I'm sure he'll get more spotlight in later chapters. But for now, I like having the focus on Kaden and Azimuth. Their friendship is shown pretty well throughout this chapter, and I love their interactions in this story! There are also some pretty interesting OCs in this story (I mean... Ratchet's mom kind of counts as one since there's so little on her), and I like what I see so far when it comes to their personalities. Overall, the characters in here are pretty well-written, and I look forward to seeing more of them in future chapters.

Ah, now I can talk about the action. This was pretty thrilling to read: we got the rush to the hospital, the introduction of both characters we know and characters we don't, the world-building of the setting this is taking place in, and of course the question of what to do with Ratchet after finding him in such an injured state. I was hooked on every word, and I quite liked how you handled everything.

The only critiques I have of this chapter is that there were a lot of typos and grammar errors, and that this may have needed more detail in some areas. I don't know the quality of your writing now, a couple of months later, but that might be something to look into in the future. I know you aren't a professional writer, nobody here truly is, but a little bit can go a long way, and taking some extra time even if it means publishing at a later date, can do wonders to clean up a lot of mistakes and help the story read better. I don't know how busy you are on a general basis, but it's some food for thought. I won't bring this up in later chapters (since I don't want to repeat going over the same mistakes if they are made in later chapters), but overall, you've done a fantastic job on this chapter, and I look forward to reading more from you!

Awesome job on this chapter! Keep up the amazing work! :)

*breathes in* Whew boy... I am sorry it's taken me so long to write some reviews on your story. This past school semester was pretty crazy, and even the start of my summer was full of dealing with problems. I can't apologize enough that it took me so long, and I hope you can forgive my lateness. My plan is to leave a review on every one of your chapters so far, and I will try to get it all done in one go if circumstances let me. So, enough of me babbling, let's see what I've been missing out on.

This is only the first chapter, and I've got to say, it's a nicely written prologue. It definitely gives the story some mystery before the reader really gets into the story, and sets up the tone of the story before we know what's fully going on. The AU you described in the author's notes is a pretty interesting one, and one I'd love to see expanded further upon. I'm interested to see what will happen next. Also, I'm not on Wattpad much (I do have an account, I'm just not that active on it), but I wish you luck with your story on both platforms!

Other than that, this is a solid prologue, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story! :D I guess, with that being said, I'll be back in... a half hour? I don't know how long these reviews will take, but rest assured, I will do what I can.

Nice job on this chapter! Keep up the wonderful work! :)

Pretty good so far. Will be back for more

Again realy good chapter Tea. I'd just like to ask something about this story. Are you planning on making this story about Ratchet being from other dimension or from other reality ( by that i mean that Alister Azimuth died in Ratchets universe and Ratchet was send into other dimension because of the six minute jump or something ). Again love this story, just try adding litle sweetness into your life and don't be so bitter all the time Tea.

well, that did seem a bit rushed, but i like how we can get to the next part of the story faster without having to wait too long for Ratchet to wake up. please keep going!

This is realy interesting story. Please don't just forget about this

please continue! its getting so good!

Hey hey hey !
That's some quality story right there!
I'm so happy that this story was uploaded, there's not many R&C fanfics about Lombaxes other than Ratchet.
Keep up the good work!