| Reviews for The Beginning |
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   CLHB chapter 1 . 7/24 Reading this story again brings smiles! Thank you |
| NikkiG26 chapter 1 . 9/19/2019 Since you ended this with The Middle does that mean a sequel? Only thing I would add is toward the end we don't hear anything about Mia. It's like she was written out with no explanation. |
| Madison Girl chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 I loved this story! I plan on reading all of your stories! |
| camillehenley3 chapter 1 . 5/11/2019 That was just so beautiful and yet so sad. Sometimes we forget just how lucky we're. Thanks for an amazing journey... |
| CTHEWOODS chapter 1 . 2/17/2019 Another great story. It was kinda sad that Ana couldn't have her own children and I about died crying at her dream of loosing the little copper haired a Teddy in the woods. But it went on to prove that you can love adopted children just like your own. I loved that. Wish we'd have had more time with the twins...lol. On to read another! |
| unicornlover99 chapter 2 . 1/31/2019 Loved it! |
| apong chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 Another great story |
| Pks9704 chapter 1 . 10/3/2018 I have enjoyed this one so much. Laughed and cried. Keep them coming please |
| Hushi Taloa chapter 1 . 9/14/2018 Greetings! I’ve been binge reading your stories this week and enjoying them greatly! I do have a couple questions about this one which could be due to my reading too quickly and blipping over scenes—anything is possible! 1. Did I miss the scenes where Ana’s sperm donor and egg carrier died? He was still in the long-term care facility and she was still with #5 when she left for Seattle, right? 2. After Ana’s ectopic pregnancy and near date with death, it sounded like they had um... conjugal relations... in the hospital. But later in the story, when Christian admitted to having a vasectomy, it was mentioned they didn’t make love until well after a six-week period after her hospital stay. Is that just a continuity thing, or am I misunderstanding? 3. Did Ana and Christian ever consider in vitro fertilization and surrogacy? Just wondering. Thanks for humoring me. And thank you so for writing! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2018 You are an amazing writer. |
| PreciousJuls chapter 1 . 9/10/2018 Another great story. No disguise for Ana this time. Lol. I really like the personality you gave C&A, especially Ana. Can’t wait to read the next one! |
| Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 1 . 8/27/2018 loved this story but I gotta ask why did you take away Anas chance of having her own babies after everything shes been through? All through the story I was so happy that what happened to her as a child did not affect her chances of having babies with Christian but the you went and took it away from her anyway and for the life of me I dont get why you did it. |
| velosews chapter 1 . 8/11/2018 I love binge reading your stories. |
| Guest Denie chapter 1 . 8/8/2018 Lovely story...I really like your treatment of the wicked witch, but I don't really understand your reluctance to let Ana have babies. Thanks for sharing! |
| meeeeouch chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 OH MY MY MY! This is one of my most favorite stories. You Are a well written author. I look forward to more of things to come! Thank you, Julia |
