Mhm, I am hoping he doesn't turn out like Emiya Kiritsugu did but dang after finishing reading this I am glad to say that I have read this. I am sad to see how both Coco and Jaune's relationship ended but hopefully in the end they at least make it right or something.

Truly was an amazing read. Not gonna lie, it does feel like there is a hole in my heart when the story ended. Nonetheless, thank you for such an amazing journey.

This has been an amazing story and is such a bittersweet way to end it. Love it all, thank you for this experience. Keep up the writing and stay safe. We all love you.

Wonderful Noir style story, I enjoyed every installment. Thank you for sharing your work!

She signed help at him,,, didn’t make no sense

This is one of the better stories here. Surprised it has fewer reviews than so many of the mediocre content on this site.
Hoping you come back with another one sooner rather than later; till then stay healthy and safe :)

The only complaint I have is that it ended.

I'm confused, is Coco a maiden? Or is she just a target due too Jaune?

Shitti

That part with Neo was confusing, other than that it was a pretty good ending.

Unreal

I'm so sad that this story is ending! It is by far one of the best stories I've read in a long time fanfic or otherwise.

His family better not die or I will start a riot

What an amazing story, I can safely say I enjoyed every chapter! The world building and character development is superb! I eagerly await your next installment!

Hello good author, I have just caught up as now of typing this. I have to say, its a pretty interesting concept as well as the paring. Not much to say other than cant wait to see another chapter.