| Reviews for Shadow of the Bay |
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   WindbornesWord chapter 11 . 7/26 This is a fun Fic, I wonder if they’ll pick up Taylor soonish. Hope you update this sooner rather than later |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/22 The plot feels like it’s been flowing pretty logically, and it is kinda funny how the bit about nindo meshes well with Worm parahumans getting stronger when in situations similar to their trigger. As for capes, I was inclined to think Brian, Aisha, Sophia, but I wasn’t completely sure given that the last girl’s ethnicity was “not Empire” rather than explicitly black. And Sophia doesn’t seem like the type to sign up for classes anyway. On the other hand, I have no idea the timeline between Lisa’s abduction and Taylor’s trigger. |
| conjac chapter 11 . 5/24 tenten couldn't possibly do it herself, but with the parallels between bijuu and endbringers jiraiya could totally jinchuuriki up Leviathan if he wanted to. |
| beserkerbeast chapter 11 . 4/12 wow, love to see more, been quiet for awhile. Read this on Spacebatle, was going through fanfics for good worm cross and saw this again. Hope things are good. BB |
| mutecebu chapter 11 . 4/1 I reread this - yep, still good. Your Naruto writing style ranks among the pinnacle of the fandom, IMO. Tenten going a little too hard core and freaking out the people of Brockton Bay - that makes me so happy. “Just edgy enough” indeed. |
| OmegaUltima chapter 11 . 12/30/2019 Hope that you're still planning on continuing this eventually, because there's so very much left unexplored, especially the Endbringers... |
| 475213 chapter 3 . 10/10/2019 What would ninja coffee be like? Chakra-infused tar-like caffeinated substance? Maybe they would dry it and turn it into a bar. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/20/2019 Man this story deserves more attention, crossover section can be a hard filter to get found past through. Really nice setup and characterisation, too stuff all round. Can't wait for more. |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 11 . 8/30/2019 Oh my . Does dragon read it? Lol I wonder how many of those he work with read it. Hmm imperial arms I wonder which pairing that is. armsy with either Kaiser ... or imperial Japan Lung... or even Chevalier Makes sense with so many things going . |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 10 . 8/30/2019 A ninja actually doing assassinations nice . |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 9 . 8/30/2019 Interesting showdown. |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 8 . 8/30/2019 A pleasant suprise. Nice no more squishy thinker . Ninja all the way . Imagine if tats learns fuinjutsu it would be scary. Hmm given that kaguya does devour planetary resources ishe does seem similar to shino. |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 7 . 8/30/2019 Haha her creative hobbies. Dragon is totally his beard. Though. I wonder who she ships him with ... and if he is seme or Ike or both |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 Lol chun li n Ryu. |
| Suzululu4moe chapter 5 . 8/30/2019 Lol the sight of beauty . Haha armsy. Pet detective Tt. |
