This is so good! I love the way you write, it's just so beautiful! I hope you continue this, it's too good to leave in the dust!

Damn, im hooked. Think i re-read about 4 times; im imm loveeee!

Whoaaah dis is an awesome read so far. Loving it! Looking forward to the next chapter!

The "occupational hazard" reminded me of How to Train Your Dragon, lol. Also definitely interesting.

I love how this is introducing the story! There's enough informations to get a good idea of how things are, but also there isnt too much infos and it's obvious we have more things to learn. Lavi is way too curious for his own good but makes the perfect POV to follow; and gosh for reasons I can pick hints of who "Exitium" is but even if picked, they can lead to different thoughts/options and who knows which might be true.
I'm very eager (but patient) for next chapter! This is very engaging and makes it easy to want to read more~