I'm picturing Sarah's apartment like Dana's apartment in Ghostbusters. There is no legit reason other than "ghost" in the title, and I can't unpicture it. I've always thought that the idea of mixing Labyrinth with police/journalism/etc. to be interesting - the too real with the fae fantasy. Nice story - thanks for sharing!

Interesting about the obsession thing - it that a real part of faery lore?

Curious... I wonder why he turned cruel those last few months. And I wonder who's in charge of the Labyrinth if Jareth's title has been revoked. Careless wishes... oh, Sarah, she never learns.

Sarah is a terrible friend - if I were Miguel, I would never tell Sarah anything else ever again, and she would have to deal because she brought it on herself. And then breaking & entering? Sarah behaving badly all over the place.

So, this particular nightmare is a recurring one? Also, middle school is awesome. Toby will love it.

I like Miguel, too. :)

Gasp! I don't know what else to say... Jareth, how could you?!

Oh Jareth, even dark you are so predictable when it comes to Sarah. Lol

And yet another twist. Labyrinthtine of you!
My only complaint is that I would have liked a longer, more fleshed out story. Very novel approach - I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting twist. I wondered about the blood and how Jareth’s action would be perceived.

Also - I hope you found a new and better job in the meantime.

I like th twist of Sarah treating Toby’s loss like a kidnapping/ more conventional... And now I’m worried for Toby!

A promising start! Murderous Jareth, eh? I’m certainly hooked enough to keep reading.

Oh wow, I LOVED THIS ENDING! It was PERFECT! Bravo! I like that you did something different with Jareth, made him an actual villain. Good job, I know that's not what most readers expect and applaud the balls it takes to write a story like that. I look forward to reading anything else you put out.

Will Jareth get the Fae equivalent of professional help he needs?

I liked this story. Do you plan to do a sequel?