Your original story was excellent but your rewrite IS A FREAKING MASTERPIECE! It’s been so long that you probably don’t plan on continuing it, but I hope you do!

Guirrl! This is so much better! You did an amazing job, hopefully you can come back and keep going

Wait please come back this is so good WILL ED BE OKAY WHERES HIS PAP WHEN HE NEEDS HIM
I HOPE YOU PLAN ON UPDATING BUT IF NOT JUST KNOW THIS WAS WONDERFUL AND I HOPE YOU HAVE A LOVELY LIFE

bless your soul,

~YAJJ

Oh I remember reading this, it'll be great to be able to read it again! This was a great chapter!

OMG THE VAST IMPROVEMENTS ALREADY. GIRLLLL YOUR WRITING HAS GROWN A LOT SINCE THEN