Dont worry about it. I love this story and I hope that you can continue it.

Really love this story you've put together. Keep up the great work!

To be perfectly honest I think that you need to do a soft reboot. While I like the idea here, essentially Percy being flung into the distant future of MHA, you give the whole story a VERY rushed feel to it. You have major plot points to get to, but you need to BUILD to them instead of just throwing it out there for us or just being like “this happens…the end”.

Also, a bit of just straight criticism, Percy really shouldn’t be outright talking about the gods and revealing who they are so casually (especially since Zeus is very trigger-happy). He should be keeping them a secret, as well as his true identity unless circumstances FORCE him to.

So ideas for expanding your plot: what is on Percy’s mind when he first falls through the portal? How does he feel after Deku tells him it’s 300 years later? From his perspective he JUST ended a massive war seconds earlier.
Is he mourning his losses? Does he pay tribute to the friends and allies he lost? What about his mother and Stepfather? Try not to just gloss over things and try and REALLY get inside their heads.

Also, a SLIGHT plot hole that you need to fill in…where is Percy staying during the first semester? Being a minor, he’d most likely need a guardian to take him in until he’s of age and can get a job to afford rent and such.

If you ultimately do go with the soft reboot idea, I would advise you start the story earlier in the MHA timeline and have Percy dropped in around the same time that Deku is chosen as All Might’s Successor, that way you have time to establish how Percy adapts to the new world, and plan out how Percy will navigate the legal routes of needing to establish an identity, have a guardian, etc and then the arc culminates in the entrance exam where everyone meets up. As for Mineta, he can be placed in Class B or in the General Education classes, instead of needing to be expelled to make room for Percy.

This as just perfect! Could you hurry up and write the rest? PLZ?!

Wow
You killed it

Sure, Bakugo doesn't like to lose, but he was bound in chains because he won through Todoroki holding back,

….rushed very rushed and really there are parts of this just plain doesn't make sense seeing as in the 1st chapter you basically said to become a hero you had to go to U.A I get it's the hero school that the series focuses on but really? along with the fact that in this chapter you had the school year in japan already started meaning that there would have been NO exams for percy to join oh and percy wasn't even showing ANY effects from being sent 300 years into the future AWAY from his family and friends nor did the deaths of his best friend grover or crush/girlfriend Annabeth seem to affect him

I want more pls. I understand why this doesn’t have the traction of other stories but I know that it’s a very enjoyable read. Pls write more. If only for a few. Is few love it and you very much. Ty

Please for the love of the olympians continue the Story

this is very good please update.

Sad the story hasn't been updated for so long, man I remember reading this before being a weab now after catching up with the anime industry I wish for this to continue so much more.

I love it

And the Percy X Kyoka match is perfect

Nice, I like the ship between Kyoka and Percy. Kyoka best girl!

not bad, but a little rushed. especially at the end. it was a very simple and quick info dump with little story to it. sorry, not trying to flame, just giving my honest opinion.

hurry :[