Reviews for Deal-Breaker |
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annaharding chapter 11 . 10/10 Very cute story. I liked how you laid out Nessie's behaviors, it made it more understandable. Bella was very mature in all this. I like that, too. Thanx for sharing. |
vampirelady13 chapter 10 . 7/18/2019 Good story thank you I really enjoyed it |
vampirelady13 chapter 11 . 7/18/2019 Good story thank you |
ghartling chapter 11 . 11/24/2018 Loved this Story! Thank you |
Blueboot55 chapter 11 . 9/29/2018 What a good story! Such imaginative characters. |
Ophelia85 chapter 4 . 8/25/2018 Edward needs to spend more time with his daughter. He doesn’t need to push her, but a little nudge wouldn’t hurt. |
Ophelia85 chapter 3 . 8/25/2018 She and Edward really need to talk. |
Ophelia85 chapter 2 . 8/25/2018 Not sure what I was expecting for the meeting, but this certainly wasn’t it. |
Ophelia85 chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 Great start. |
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 10 . 8/2/2018 All of author in this site all the same always make Bella forgiven Edward easily when he just said sorry. Your Bella so annoy and weak. She shouldn’t forgiven Edward that easily. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/18/2018 A lovely story. |
Paolina Beke H chapter 11 . 7/10/2018 Thanks for posting this very pretty story :) |
Iersseltje chapter 11 . 5/28/2018 Great story. Thank you for sharing. |
Longing to Write chapter 11 . 4/22/2018 Sweet story. |
c.karen09 chapter 11 . 4/21/2018 I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you for writing and sharing it. |