I'm glad you will continue this great story I hope the next chapter I would have liked you to put Serena or because you do not put a story of a trio with Ash, May and Serena with Lemon it would be great.

Great chapter and glad to see you doing this story again, plus oh shit Misty is next btw don’t tell me if you used any of my ideas for the next chapter I sent you months ago I wanna be surprised but I did come up with one more idea if you wanna know what it is.

*24 hours of non-stop sex later*

oml i would at least wait til i was inside

DON"T SAY LETS GO HOME, THE FEEEEELLLLLSSSSS!

well written, but damn... you write that for fun...?

Update? Oct here

Update?

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At some point the girls should try have a child with ash because I know they would want to start a family with him eventually especially with all that love making they did

If u want an idea of where misty may dawn and ash can have their honeymoon how about the Aloha region they got alot of places they can visit that's really suitable for their honeymoon and can check some of the places they have to offer and u can use this opportunity to have Lille Mallow and Lana meet ash misty may and dawn and be their friends and the tour guide since they do know alot about the area and maybe have them or one of them join the fun I don't mean have them join the hearm or anything like that I'm talking about how u had a couple girls like that of female character join them temporarily before not being seen again I believe that was either chapter 2 or 3 and dawn before she joined the hearm officially that kind of way I'm talking about and as for the hint u said in the authors notes I know you're hinting at one more girl to join ashs hearm and I have a feeling I know who it is but I'll wait to see who that girl is to see if my guess was right

Well I may not be sure exactly where the girls and ash can have their honeymoon but I do know a region that's suitable for them to go to that can have some unique places for them to visit and enjoy their alone time their and that is the Aloha region it's a place that is very tropical and they can relax their to and even possibly meet Mallow Lille Lana and selene(female protagonist from Pokemon Sun and Moon games) and become friends and they can be their tour guide since they would know their way around since they were born and raised their

I kinda figured you wouldn’t use all my ideas for this one but regardless this chapter was really good

Crazy.

Nice work.

Could you please respond to my pm